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05-19-2020, 08:35 PM
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First bar is nice...for me your flow is a little ehh in places, havin' said that I don't know if this written to a beat so could be feelin' it wrong, just felt it could be tightened...it seems keyed?
I do like though, some nice imagery thrown around & think thru the middle is where shit at it's smoothest... Stay up fam, I'll peep as you drop. |
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