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TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO 05-16-2020 11:38 PM

It was all a dream
 
Came out my mothers stomach like fuck it
Leavin C section scars as large as an Everest summit
Best to ever do it nigga I does it
I serve your bitch cream of wheat no hands you know she love it
I’m showin out this evening with a flowin’ stance
You can find me as a premium member on OnlyFans
I tip these girls real fat to get this wet work
Bobbin on my huge cock until their neck hurt
Man you guys can’t get girls like me I’m serious
I will rip off your moms underwear and go carnivore on her period
Imagine your dad trying desperately to pull me off
Call me the bath salt boy cuz I won’t stop when the cops are called
Dial 911 cuz dogg it’s over
It’s been right around 1,400 days since I’ve been sober
Read that bar as fourteen hundred so the flows right
Hired your sister to be in my bboy crew her pussy’s SO tight
I’m not gay I like women all the way
Is you stupid or is you dumb my nigga just call me Sway
On this dead ass site is the braggin worth it?
Your girls clit is a vinyl record now watch me scratch the surface

I like girls

NOT GAY

Exis 05-19-2020 08:35 PM

First bar is nice...for me your flow is a little ehh in places, havin' said that I don't know if this written to a beat so could be feelin' it wrong, just felt it could be tightened...it seems keyed?

I do like though, some nice imagery thrown around & think thru the middle is where shit at it's smoothest...

Stay up fam, I'll peep as you drop.


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