SPOTLIGHT Match: Sharp vs. Corleone - SHARP WINS BY DQ

Bomb Bard · 04-29-2020, 11:48 AM

sharp losing a third time? no doubt in my mind,
as this dude falls victim, like a knife to a crime/(sharp/knife)

word, this looks like something that'd be in a wutang song. sharp/knife flips have been done a lot though

I'm nice with the rhymes.. this kid over his head,
like doing sit ups on a comforter bed/(sit ups/cor)

looks like something i'd see in a linkin park track, but the weird structure for this where you append the punch into the next line hurts the wording

.. he can't fuck with cor,
sharp pains travel throughout his abdomen and rupture his heart/

reminds me of a lyric that'd be in a drake collaboration back in like 98 before he did degrassi, solid bar

after two no shows, he's still hawkin to battle?
I'll take sharp off the board, like I taught in a classroom/(sharp markers/class board)

technically it's sharpie markers, but this is cool. the type of shit sha77er s7ar would've had you ghostwrite for him on an ezboard before 9/11 happened

he knows I'll fuccin erase him,
and put his career on stand by, when I put chalk to the pavement/

cool, it'd be dope if you made this into a punch with some kind of wordplay but this is throwback simplicity, reminds me of some shit kid rock would've written circa bawitdaba before recruiting bumpy johnson's henchmen's grandson to be in a music vid with him

cause markers can't outline a corpse,
especially when that marker has gone it's course/

again, adding some punches into your verse would be cool but i dig your simplistic style that just says anything. shit is remniscent of a 1990's freestyle battle with eyedea when people just rhymed without putting thought into the words that they choose. I dig your retro swag

.. and sharp was a mark buster from the very beginning,
he can't show his face in the streets, cause niggas'll kill him/

beginning and kill him is a bit of a stretch in rhyming, but tbh that's kinda that old cash money style that would've had lil wayne and b.g. banging at your door to ghostwrite their new single about money and fat bitches in g strings so i fuck with it

.. sharp known for duckin his beef,
was confronted in peace,
but left to an unlovingly piece..

fire man, every bar had me at the edge of my seat and really demonstrated why 50 cent and eminem offered 3 mill to have you ghostwrite for them

He has a forum w/ a 'Corleone' subsection... in case you couldn't tell he needs help
Yeah, Cormega into his One Love... just turns out that love's himself

nah not really feeling it tbh

Your ego is fucking psycho but that shows no one cares about you, bro
Too self-obsessed to realize you have NO threads... the Emperor's new clothes

I like the concept. I actually forgot about this story but it came back to me upon reading, I think the wording could've been harsher

Yo, btw...
triangulate my IP w/ Crip GPS yet? You're retarded or outta your mind, dude
how you gonna find my house here when you can't even find someone who respects you?

a bit simple but it's funny enough to make me laugh, so I dig it

I'm not one you can battle. BIG FACTS: you can't rap for shit
Your battle rap credentials start and end at 'looks like Terminally Illmaculate'

kinda funny but not enough to justify the bar

Kicked it w/ RZA and found fame at 6? No one's buying that shit here
but keep sayin 'Wu' for attention at this rate and we miiiight believe you're fuckin Rick Flair

I can imagine this concept getting played quick, but since its his first battle I know of, it's fresh and this was a dope line.

BUT we FINALLY got 'proof'. Gospel rap w/ 4 views? faggit you ain't earned your lies
aint seen a shitty 2000s track with that little traction since Dale Earnhardt died

this is funny, the reference is pretty outdated but i guess it fits the 2000s theme. solid punch

Opened a teespring and think you're a mogul. 'Out of stock'... you aint clever, g
You can only get so far 'off brand, alone' when that's ALL you'll ever be.

eh wasnt really feeling this as a closer

ric flair and dale earnhardt the best lines of the battle

V/Shar easily

04-29-2020, 11:48 AM	#9
Bomb Bard FUCK YOU Join Date: Feb 2015 Posts: 1,041 Battle Record: 7-9 Rep Power: 8436727	sharp losing a third time? no doubt in my mind, as this dude falls victim, like a knife to a crime/(sharp/knife) word, this looks like something that'd be in a wutang song. sharp/knife flips have been done a lot though I'm nice with the rhymes.. this kid over his head, like doing sit ups on a comforter bed/(sit ups/cor) looks like something i'd see in a linkin park track, but the weird structure for this where you append the punch into the next line hurts the wording .. he can't fuck with cor, sharp pains travel throughout his abdomen and rupture his heart/ reminds me of a lyric that'd be in a drake collaboration back in like 98 before he did degrassi, solid bar after two no shows, he's still hawkin to battle? I'll take sharp off the board, like I taught in a classroom/(sharp markers/class board) technically it's sharpie markers, but this is cool. the type of shit sha77er s7ar would've had you ghostwrite for him on an ezboard before 9/11 happened he knows I'll fuccin erase him, and put his career on stand by, when I put chalk to the pavement/ cool, it'd be dope if you made this into a punch with some kind of wordplay but this is throwback simplicity, reminds me of some shit kid rock would've written circa bawitdaba before recruiting bumpy johnson's henchmen's grandson to be in a music vid with him cause markers can't outline a corpse, especially when that marker has gone it's course/ again, adding some punches into your verse would be cool but i dig your simplistic style that just says anything. shit is remniscent of a 1990's freestyle battle with eyedea when people just rhymed without putting thought into the words that they choose. I dig your retro swag .. and sharp was a mark buster from the very beginning, he can't show his face in the streets, cause niggas'll kill him/ beginning and kill him is a bit of a stretch in rhyming, but tbh that's kinda that old cash money style that would've had lil wayne and b.g. banging at your door to ghostwrite their new single about money and fat bitches in g strings so i fuck with it .. sharp known for duckin his beef, was confronted in peace, but left to an unlovingly piece.. fire man, every bar had me at the edge of my seat and really demonstrated why 50 cent and eminem offered 3 mill to have you ghostwrite for them He has a forum w/ a 'Corleone' subsection... in case you couldn't tell he needs help Yeah, Cormega into his One Love... just turns out that love's himself nah not really feeling it tbh Your ego is fucking psycho but that shows no one cares about you, bro Too self-obsessed to realize you have NO threads... the Emperor's new clothes I like the concept. I actually forgot about this story but it came back to me upon reading, I think the wording could've been harsher Yo, btw... triangulate my IP w/ Crip GPS yet? You're retarded or outta your mind, dude how you gonna find my house here when you can't even find someone who respects you? a bit simple but it's funny enough to make me laugh, so I dig it I'm not one you can battle. BIG FACTS: you can't rap for shit Your battle rap credentials start and end at 'looks like Terminally Illmaculate' kinda funny but not enough to justify the bar Kicked it w/ RZA and found fame at 6? No one's buying that shit here but keep sayin 'Wu' for attention at this rate and we miiiight believe you're fuckin Rick Flair I can imagine this concept getting played quick, but since its his first battle I know of, it's fresh and this was a dope line. BUT we FINALLY got 'proof'. Gospel rap w/ 4 views? faggit you ain't earned your lies aint seen a shitty 2000s track with that little traction since Dale Earnhardt died this is funny, the reference is pretty outdated but i guess it fits the 2000s theme. solid punch Opened a teespring and think you're a mogul. 'Out of stock'... you aint clever, g You can only get so far 'off brand, alone' when that's ALL you'll ever be. eh wasnt really feeling this as a closer ric flair and dale earnhardt the best lines of the battle V/Shar easily