SPOTLIGHT Match: Sharp vs. Corleone - SHARP WINS BY DQ
 

Rules

Due Dates:
• Verses are due THURSDAY by 11:59 PM PST.
• Goal is for voting to end Saturdays
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ
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Line Limit:
• Min. = 12 lines
• Max. = 20 lines
• The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.


Voting:
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General Rules:
• 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
• 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made.
• Feeding = DQ.
• Recycling = DQ.
• Biting = DQ.
• No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
• Unless a picture battle is agreed upon,
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means you will disqualified.
• A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged.
• If your opponent doesn't check in,
you still have to post a verse.
• Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
• If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
must match the 1st person's line amount.


@Sharp
@Corleone

Showing or not, 16

I roasted you twice already, and you pulled two no shows at our battles over at the open mic section.. but ill roast you again, no problem.. im down.. count me in..

That was the open mic. I know you only go into other people's threads to talk about yourself, but if you read a few in the OM you might get it

quick keystyle..

sharp losing a third time? no doubt in my mind,
as this dude falls victim, like a knife to a crime/(sharp/knife)
I'm nice with the rhymes.. this kid over his head,
like doing sit ups on a comforter bed/(sit ups/cor)
.. he can't fuck with cor,
sharp pains travel throughout his abdomen and rupture his heart/
after two no shows, he's still hawkin to battle?
I'll take sharp off the board, like I taught in a classroom/(sharp markers/class board)
he knows I'll fuccin erase him,
and put his career on stand by, when I put chalk to the pavement/
cause markers can't outline a corpse,
especially when that marker has gone it's course/
.. and sharp was a mark buster from the very beginning,
he can't show his face in the streets, cause niggas'll kill him/
.. sharp known for duckin his beef,
was confronted in peace,
but left to an unlovingly piece..

Unlovingly Piece Gang

https://i.imgur.com/LvoR5cp.jpg

He has a forum w/ a 'Corleone' subsection... in case you couldn't tell he needs help
Yeah, Cormega into his One Love... just turns out that love's himself
Your ego is fucking psycho but that shows no one cares about you, bro
Too self-obsessed to realize you have NO threads... the Emperor's new clothes
Yo, btw...
triangulate my IP w/ Crip GPS yet? You're retarded or outta your mind, dude
how you gonna find my house here when you can't even find someone who respects you?
I'm not one you can battle. BIG FACTS: you can't rap for shit
Your battle rap credentials start and end at 'looks like Terminally Illmaculate'
Kicked it w/ RZA and found fame at 6? No one's buying that shit here
but keep sayin 'Wu' for attention at this rate and we miiiight believe you're fuckin Rick Flair
BUT we FINALLY got 'proof'. Gospel rap w/ 4 views? faggit you ain't earned your lies
aint seen a shitty 2000s track with that little traction since Dale Earnhardt died
Opened a teespring and think you're a mogul. 'Out of stock'... you aint clever, g
You can only get so far 'off brand, alone' when that's ALL you'll ever be.

sharp losing a third time? no doubt in my mind,
as this dude falls victim, like a knife to a crime/(sharp/knife)

word, this looks like something that'd be in a wutang song. sharp/knife flips have been done a lot though

I'm nice with the rhymes.. this kid over his head,
like doing sit ups on a comforter bed/(sit ups/cor)

looks like something i'd see in a linkin park track, but the weird structure for this where you append the punch into the next line hurts the wording

.. he can't fuck with cor,
sharp pains travel throughout his abdomen and rupture his heart/

reminds me of a lyric that'd be in a drake collaboration back in like 98 before he did degrassi, solid bar

after two no shows, he's still hawkin to battle?
I'll take sharp off the board, like I taught in a classroom/(sharp markers/class board)

technically it's sharpie markers, but this is cool. the type of shit sha77er s7ar would've had you ghostwrite for him on an ezboard before 9/11 happened

he knows I'll fuccin erase him,
and put his career on stand by, when I put chalk to the pavement/

cool, it'd be dope if you made this into a punch with some kind of wordplay but this is throwback simplicity, reminds me of some shit kid rock would've written circa bawitdaba before recruiting bumpy johnson's henchmen's grandson to be in a music vid with him

cause markers can't outline a corpse,
especially when that marker has gone it's course/

again, adding some punches into your verse would be cool but i dig your simplistic style that just says anything. shit is remniscent of a 1990's freestyle battle with eyedea when people just rhymed without putting thought into the words that they choose. I dig your retro swag

.. and sharp was a mark buster from the very beginning,
he can't show his face in the streets, cause niggas'll kill him/

beginning and kill him is a bit of a stretch in rhyming, but tbh that's kinda that old cash money style that would've had lil wayne and b.g. banging at your door to ghostwrite their new single about money and fat bitches in g strings so i fuck with it

.. sharp known for duckin his beef,
was confronted in peace,
but left to an unlovingly piece..

fire man, every bar had me at the edge of my seat and really demonstrated why 50 cent and eminem offered 3 mill to have you ghostwrite for them



He has a forum w/ a 'Corleone' subsection... in case you couldn't tell he needs help
Yeah, Cormega into his One Love... just turns out that love's himself

nah not really feeling it tbh

Your ego is fucking psycho but that shows no one cares about you, bro
Too self-obsessed to realize you have NO threads... the Emperor's new clothes

I like the concept. I actually forgot about this story but it came back to me upon reading, I think the wording could've been harsher

Yo, btw...
triangulate my IP w/ Crip GPS yet? You're retarded or outta your mind, dude
how you gonna find my house here when you can't even find someone who respects you?

a bit simple but it's funny enough to make me laugh, so I dig it

I'm not one you can battle. BIG FACTS: you can't rap for shit
Your battle rap credentials start and end at 'looks like Terminally Illmaculate'

kinda funny but not enough to justify the bar

Kicked it w/ RZA and found fame at 6? No one's buying that shit here
but keep sayin 'Wu' for attention at this rate and we miiiight believe you're fuckin Rick Flair

I can imagine this concept getting played quick, but since its his first battle I know of, it's fresh and this was a dope line.

BUT we FINALLY got 'proof'. Gospel rap w/ 4 views? faggit you ain't earned your lies
aint seen a shitty 2000s track with that little traction since Dale Earnhardt died

this is funny, the reference is pretty outdated but i guess it fits the 2000s theme. solid punch

Opened a teespring and think you're a mogul. 'Out of stock'... you aint clever, g
You can only get so far 'off brand, alone' when that's ALL you'll ever be.

eh wasnt really feeling this as a closer



ric flair and dale earnhardt the best lines of the battle

mvgt Sharp

lol.. @Answer you gotta lotta nerve to reference my verse to sharps whole game on talking shit about me.. like im stupid or something? how does any of the shit I keystyled remotely comes close to reminding anyone of linkin park or how I was offered 3 million dollars to ghostwrite for 50 cent or eminem? which is true, by the way, I was offered that amount of money from my manager then named, Brian Wayne Perry, of Universal music group but your whole breakdown was off sharps blatant hate on me on previous threads in the open discussion forum that even yourself followed up on, as you also talked your shit about me, not knowing a lick about me.. Yo, I want to protest @Answer vote as I find it not to be so odd that adverses' vote is completely bought in through either @Sharp himself or unknown resources.. plus, the proof is in the pudding, sharps' verse was extremely wack and off key to a point it looked like some 4 year old kid wrote that shit for him.. lol lets be real!!

Wow .. not the legend we thought we had

Buddy

It's you

You got that clown magnetism

You made a name for yourself here... It's just not what you want it to be

I'm gonna let votes come in before I critique your verse... You could at keep a level head until it's over

And do you mean answer or adverse? They're two different people

not true at all, but being embraced can go a long way my man.. and since Ive been here, the only dude to do that was anon and thats only because we go wayy back to over 20+ years ago.. all I can say about netcees.org is that I remember being invited to this forum somewhere around 1998 or so, due to a crew battle with U.G, as im also apart of that crew/community as well but the crew battle never happened and thus I never visited netcees.org.. but thats how far as it goes.. im not saying that I wouldnt love to be apart of netcees.orgs' community or crew, perhaps but you guys are disrespectful as a mo'fo so I doubt that would happen in any sense.. so please, dont patronize me with things like "I thought we had a legend" because in essence, I put it out there that I was from U.G from the get and im pretty sure thats how all of this bullshit about me transpired because the last time from what Ive heard, we as two different forum communities' do not get along.. so there ya go.. much love out to those who support me anyways.. peace

You are the only person to care about UG in 2020

Get your head out of your ass and people won't clown as much. It's that simple

Netcees was made in 2009 retard lmaooo

Ain’t nobody invite you here, you invited yourself to invite us to your shitty spam filled ezboard attached to your wix website that you sell cheap clothes on

clown magnetism? and I made a name for myself here? kid, I could of re-opened freestyle universe or something and shitted on your whole board.. or did something dramatic of that nature because my name holds weight to that level.. so tell me, how did I make a name for myself here when initially, Ive been mentioning names you've all heard of before that I use to get down with on old ezboard.com forum communities.. smh you got shit twisted about me.. plus, all the record deals and etc Ive passed up on in my past that I essentially werent feeling with major record companies.. that YOU read in my artist bio.. smh wow, your a herb.. lol

Literally posting stuff like that lol

I like the breakdowns. Alot of those would have been so over my head without the lil brackets.. sharp of the board was low key fire. Vote the idiot

another thing.. I was invited here you dumbass, by Ignorant Prodigy, it just wasnt up until years later where I decided to visit this forum myself and see who was posting here.. I have nothing against anyone on netcees.org but dont try to play me my dude like I cant get shit poppin to my favor in any sense, whether that be on this forum, or off net.. because by the looks of it, your on some shit like that and I aint feelin that at all..

Confirmed Geno/ouch/Finny account


Fuckin idiot we got you!

lol.. leave @Genocide out of this, and he had already confirmed who I was to this board, so your shit outta luck.. geno is cool peoples.. damn yall some haters.. lmfao I cant even find a friendly battle without some shit poppin off.. and being nice at doing it, at that.. whew.. somebody strike a match, these niggas is starting to reak ass.. lolol