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dull boy · 03-19-2020, 10:33 PM

I feel like I should like your writing, but I don't. It feels devoid of emotion and purely academic. It's a mixture of your wordplay style (basic af) combined with the length of your pieces (indicating purpose and effort) that rub me the wrong way as a writer who prides himself on honesty.

It's dishonest in it's insecurity, or to put another way, it's done in a way that seems too deliberate to be so empty.

This is more feedback than I've given a piece in a while. That in of itself says something, and I think it's that I see dedication to the craft, but lacking in what I personally enjoy.

*pat on the back*

03-19-2020, 10:33 PM	#3
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,053 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345604	I feel like I should like your writing, but I don't. It feels devoid of emotion and purely academic. It's a mixture of your wordplay style (basic af) combined with the length of your pieces (indicating purpose and effort) that rub me the wrong way as a writer who prides himself on honesty. It's dishonest in it's insecurity, or to put another way, it's done in a way that seems too deliberate to be so empty. This is more feedback than I've given a piece in a while. That in of itself says something, and I think it's that I see dedication to the craft, but lacking in what I personally enjoy. pat on the back