Revenge anf Backstabbing

Exis · 08-13-2018, 10:01 AM

Thought I'd drop some comments on a piece of yours before you 1-2 punch me in the face this week lol...

Really like your openin' bar...maybe not quite worded like that but yeah, dug it.

Hush is right...you need to flesh this out, I respect it's a draft & you probably wanted some sorta feed to see where you wanna take this from here...but the foundation is solid imo fam, this could (& should) be turned in2 some really mean ass topical.

But do you nigga...stay upwards.

08-13-2018, 10:01 AM	#3
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Thought I'd drop some comments on a piece of yours before you 1-2 punch me in the face this week lol... Really like your openin' bar...maybe not quite worded like that but yeah, dug it. Hush is right...you need to flesh this out, I respect it's a draft & you probably wanted some sorta feed to see where you wanna take this from here...but the foundation is solid imo fam, this could (& should) be turned in2 some really mean ass topical. But do you nigga...stay upwards.