Revenge anf Backstabbing Rough Draft
 

When the black sheep’s neglected and becomes the black knight on a white horse
When the black king’s taken by the white knights he used to fight for.
When you kill to climb up the ladder where the last rung snaps
And your dead enemies rise like they’re back from naps
Reversal of Grinch when there’s a back to stab
And the knives that cut our roast beast start to slash and jab
When the 3rd born let’s his mother drown
And kills the 2nd brother for the others crown
I’ve met so many Judas’s I don’t trust James and John
I’ve left so many Brutus’s in the flame’s and bronze
I try to pray to the hailed godly when I’m feeling blue
“In the name of the father, son and— to hell they’ll prob’ly kill me too.”
Half the parent killers are murdered by shanks of pathetic orphans
Every man who makes a black night, takes the mans life
Will face the headless horseman.

Triple the length and post it again


You may be into something here

Thought I'd drop some comments on a piece of yours before you 1-2 punch me in the face this week lol...

Really like your openin' bar...maybe not quite worded like that but yeah, dug it.

Hush is right...you need to flesh this out, I respect it's a draft & you probably wanted some sorta feed to see where you wanna take this from here...but the foundation is solid imo fam, this could (& should) be turned in2 some really mean ass topical.

But do you nigga...stay upwards.

fuckin garbage loooool

Crazy man