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Old 01-31-2018, 08:18 AM   #6
Habitat
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Join Date: Mar 2016
Posts: 742
Battle Record: 8-6


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- 1-2 LR Tournament

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i got more Reel Firelines than Berkleys fishing rods,
pistols giv flesh wounds, these Sticks Point thru his meat worse than Shishkabobs.
ok
all my nameflips been done,all u guys' methods are the same,
cosmic shit, so u better Study 13, or dimension in my name.
not feelin it
i got gun bars, but i dont even need to spark the lead,
ima Shark facing a caged scuba diver.. fin to rip his bars to shreds.
i get it fin/finna as in going to rip his bar to shreds but I don't think this is clever or hard hitting.
trust me yall, in all aspects.. aint shit he can do wit me,
knuckle game tight, get Lit Up with the Hands like im using Chi.
this was ok

vs

I come correct, every line dropped with heat
And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat
good. seen it a few times but personal/clean wording helped here
You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter
I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter
lol aight
I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son
We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct one
simple but it hit
If you had a rep, I'd be leaving it in tatters
I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters
throw away

Krucial hsa the idea of it but needs better concepts and needs to work on his wording.

I dunno if ender is an alias but he has nice wording which helps when using simple or previously seen concepts.

I've got it 3-2 here for ender and enders were harder hitting too.

v/ender
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