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Ender vs. Krucial Th1rt3en - ENDER WINS
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Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ FAILURE TO VOTE ON 3 BATTLES IS A DQ. NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE!!! YOU WILL BE DISQUALIFIED. VOTE ON 3 BATTLES OR YOU LOSE. SIMPLE! THERE’S BEEN A LOT OF COMPLAINTS ABOUT VOTING RECENTLY, IF THERE IS SOMEONE WHO YOU DON’T WANT TO VOTE IN YOUR BATTLE YOU MUST STATE THEIR NAME IN YOUR CHECK IN. IF IT’S A CRAZY AMOUNT OF PEOPLE THEN SORRY YOU’RE JUST A BITCH AND ALL VOTES WILL COUNT. AS PER ORC @Ender @Krucial Th1rt3en |
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here go something quick, aint been having time for this shit lately to be battling everyday, seeing how yall lifelong text battlers heard every single bar that can b done already lol
but here goes a quick 8 so i guess since im dropping mine first, then my opponent has to do the same ammount of bars im doing ok coo -----------------------------------vs ENDER--- i got more Reel Firelines than Berkleys fishing rods, pistols giv flesh wounds, these Sticks Point thru his meat worse than Shishkabobs. all my nameflips been done,all u guys' methods are the same, cosmic shit, so u better Study 13, or dimension in my name. i got gun bars, but i dont even need to spark the lead, ima Shark facing a caged scuba diver.. fin to rip his bars to shreds. trust me yall, in all aspects.. aint shit he can do wit me, knuckle game tight, get Lit Up with the Hands like im using Chi. |
I come correct, every line dropped with heat
And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct one If you had a rep, I'd be leaving it in tatters I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters |
i got more Reel Firelines than Berkleys fishing rods,
pistols giv flesh wounds, these Sticks Point thru his meat worse than Shishkabobs. ok all my nameflips been done,all u guys' methods are the same, cosmic shit, so u better Study 13, or dimension in my name. not feelin it i got gun bars, but i dont even need to spark the lead, ima Shark facing a caged scuba diver.. fin to rip his bars to shreds. i get it fin/finna as in going to rip his bar to shreds but I don't think this is clever or hard hitting. trust me yall, in all aspects.. aint shit he can do wit me, knuckle game tight, get Lit Up with the Hands like im using Chi. this was ok vs I come correct, every line dropped with heat And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat good. seen it a few times but personal/clean wording helped here You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter lol aight I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct one simple but it hit If you had a rep, I'd be leaving it in tatters I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters throw away Krucial hsa the idea of it but needs better concepts and needs to work on his wording. I dunno if ender is an alias but he has nice wording which helps when using simple or previously seen concepts. I've got it 3-2 here for ender and enders were harder hitting too. v/ender |
i got more Reel Firelines than Berkleys fishing rods,
pistols giv flesh wounds, these Sticks Point thru his meat worse than Shishkabobs. This was ok! all my nameflips been done,all u guys' methods are the same, cosmic shit, so u better Study 13, or dimension in my name. Nice i got gun bars, but i dont even need to spark the lead, ima Shark facing a caged scuba diver.. fin to rip his bars to shreds. This was ight! trust me yall, in all aspects.. aint shit he can do wit me, knuckle game tight, get Lit Up with the Hands like im using Chi. Decent ---- I come correct, every line dropped with heat And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat Lol Nice You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter Nice! I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct one ight... If you had a rep, I'd be leaving it in tatters I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters ok! I had to read this battle like 3 times, Ender had more personals then punches, simple structure, krucial had some ok lines but they were some what hitting harder to me. V: Krucial |
Krucial
i got more Reel Firelines than Berkleys fishing rods, pistols giv flesh wounds, these Sticks Point thru his meat worse than Shishkabobs. I like the setup but i felt the finisher even tho it was good didnt really correlate together shoudve tied ur finisher into a fishing reference all my nameflips been done,all u guys' methods are the same, cosmic shit, so u better Study 13, or dimension in my name. Cool not a harsh hit though i got gun bars, but i dont even need to spark the lead, ima Shark facing a caged scuba diver.. fin to rip his bars to shreds. Dope flip here trust me yall, in all aspects.. aint shit he can do wit me, knuckle game tight, get Lit Up with the Hands like im using Chi. Tai chi never heard anyone call it Chi lol anyways this was just ok lit up.with the hands was too simple Ender I come correct, every line dropped with heat And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat Lol simple but good humor factor You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter Lol this a personal flip her im assuming @Ender get at me in chat to confirm I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct onefat wife Simple but cool flip good execution If you had a rep, I'd be leaving it in tatters I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters Cocky lol Well Krucial focused on being over fancy with wps alot of heads quoted his opener but ur finisher always has to correlate with ur setup your talking about how ur lines are reel fire then u switch it to a gun bar that had nothing to do with the opener as a whole. The shark reference was dope. The tai chi line i felt u couldve had something more creative in the reference. Ender like i said simple lines but he executed on them better and added a little hunor factor. V/Ender |
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I come correct, every line dropped with heat And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat Niiiiice You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter Killer I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct onefat wife Alright bro leave him alone hes done If you had a rep, I'd be leaving it in tatters I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters Ahhh you broke the fourth wall didnt like that. V ender |
Had to go with Krucial on this one because of his punches being more complex and thought out and he was also better in terms of his rhyming, using multis effectively throughout his verse. Ender was too simplistic for my liking in almost all facets, which led to his verse not having the same impact his opponent's did.
MVGT : Krucial. |
Krucial came with some pretty fierce wp. Major improvement from previous week(s). That everyone hates me attitude is getting old tho. Your content spoke for itself this week. I don't like 'stick' lines but delivery on shish kebob was cool. Dimension is creative. Shark cage is cool. Not a huge fan of the closer.
Ender -- Come plain is cool opener. Simple and effective. Goodz is a cool personal, but not a super harsh diss. Form bar was cool as shit -- much like the opener. Closer is shit. Ender had two decent lines, understated and not super harsh so I was almost tempted to give it to Krucial tbh. Both closers were shit. Subtract that and it comes down to originality. Ender had some funny personals, opener probably swayed it cuz it cut right to the heart of the matter. Closer than it looks tho. Vote -- Ender |
i got more Reel Firelines than Berkleys fishing rods,
pistols giv flesh wounds, these Sticks Point thru his meat worse than Shish-kabobs. cool all my nameflips been done,all u guys' methods are the same, cosmic shit, so u better Study 13, or dimension in my name. ok i got gun bars, but i dont even need to spark the lead, ima Shark facing a caged scuba diver.. fin to rip his bars to shreds. bit of a reach here trust me yall, in all aspects.. aint shit he can do wit me, knuckle game tight, get Lit Up with the Hands like im using Chi. this is an old concept but the flip is decent Idk why you wanna leave bro, everyone hates on everyone. Stop being emotional about it and just keep progressing as you’ve been doing. Each week I see improvement from you, and it’s only UP from here. G tho kick the “everyone hates me” persona and just battle. Vs I come correct, every line dropped with heat And you come plain, appropriate since that's what you do after every defeat simple but effective You always drop bullshit, lose then get bitter I got the goods on you, best you can claim is that he follows you on twitter gone lol I'm in peak battling form, I'll school you son We don't know where your form at, or why you can't write in a correct one alright If you had a rep, I'd be leaving it in tatters I can't be bothered to finish this bar properly, but really now, like it matters the fuck Really close battle here, 2 different styles battling each other but I think ender edges it with wording that was impeccable this week. Concepts a bit simple but the delivery was great, good job to both. Vote Ender |
Ender was better. Jesus at Krucial wtf is that. Ur first two concepts had potential but u killed them
The twitter line won it alone V ender |
Kruc
opener was dece dimension in my name was dope other 2 missed vs Ender format joint was dope, n personal opener way.too played to me & the other 2 were too simple v/krucial |
ENDER
13 you had potential heat w/ 'shish kabob' & 'dimensions', but you the execution lacking. Ender 'complain & format were simple, but effective & 'twitter' killed it, great personal. |
Ender Wins 7-3
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