Verse Work in Progress

ACTIVATE SELF · 01-26-2018, 08:47 AM

So this began as most flex joints do -- luke warm and trying to find it's footing. It went on for a bit. Nothing impressive. Then somewhere around "brainstorm" and "acid rain" it began to heat up. Got a little flat shortly after, and then towards the end, the heat was turned all the way up and you caught your groove. However, I wish you would have kept the momentum going, because I was really starting to enjoy your flow and cadence, and your lyrics where getting sharper and alot more impressive. In any case, I think you have some skills, E. Drop another verse and I'll feed. Peace.

01-26-2018, 08:47 AM	#10
ACTIVATE SELF Senior Member Join Date: Dec 2017 Posts: 783 Battle Record: 2-1 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 19584278	So this began as most flex joints do -- luke warm and trying to find it's footing. It went on for a bit. Nothing impressive. Then somewhere around "brainstorm" and "acid rain" it began to heat up. Got a little flat shortly after, and then towards the end, the heat was turned all the way up and you caught your groove. However, I wish you would have kept the momentum going, because I was really starting to enjoy your flow and cadence, and your lyrics where getting sharper and alot more impressive. In any case, I think you have some skills, E. Drop another verse and I'll feed. Peace.