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I thought it was dope. I read the lyrics along with the track, cool shit and I thought it fit well with the beat. Definately feel what people are saying about mic presence, but as people say; it's dropped in '04. Based on the song alone even tho' it's close to 10 years ago; I didn't mind that the rhymescheme was repetitive, but with better delivery and some emotion to the shit you're saying could make it seem less repetitive and ''boring''. Subject matter is done to hell, but I feel you did it great enough justice. Keep spittin'.
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