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Senior Member
Join Date: Mar 2016
Posts: 269
Battle Record: 17-9
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Habitat:
Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007 I dug it all but the altar, boy line. dunno, for whatever reason that line just was meh to me. Everything else I liked. Cool wp with kaleidoscope, apparel, and the nameplays (particularly the closer, was pretty dope). Wanderer: Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!" You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet Those were the lines I dug from u. Cool shit, you had some interesting concepts as well, but i just feel like Habitat executed his a little better. Came across w/ more sting. Good reads from both... v/ Habitat |
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