Day Drinkin'

Adverse · 03-28-2016, 12:49 AM

Hey guys, a lot of you probably don't know me but I've been around Netcees for some years now and have been very on and off. I've been rapping on beats since 2012 and just haven't felt any improvement in awhile so I decided to restart my discography, so this is the first song I've dropped after my renewal. Please give me some critique, I could really use it especially constructively, I appreciate it in advance.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DedgULdku20

03-28-2016, 12:49 AM	#1
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,752 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446146	Day Drinkin' Hey guys, a lot of you probably don't know me but I've been around Netcees for some years now and have been very on and off. I've been rapping on beats since 2012 and just haven't felt any improvement in awhile so I decided to restart my discography, so this is the first song I've dropped after my renewal. Please give me some critique, I could really use it especially constructively, I appreciate it in advance. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DedgULdku20