fraze 7-4 vs Odd Ways 2-1 - ODD WINS

sral · 07-27-2015, 07:04 AM

I got Odd winning here, a couple maybe went over my head like the NFL shit? But that yoga party hit was LOTB for me, closer was fresh too I havent seen that done before. Pretty sure someone used a metal in the mouth/Joker line in the URL Cypher thread recently so I almost had to leave my love for that out, but it was nice enough to hit.

Fraze had the piccolo bar that was a nice wordplay, the shooting craps concept was nice too. The lines over head ish felt stale to me though, rest was either okay or didn't standout for me.

I've got Odd winning this, just better execution of his concepts so even the ones I wasn't feeling as much felt at least original or creative enough to warrant quoting. Close match up!

07-27-2015, 07:04 AM	#22
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,605 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	I got Odd winning here, a couple maybe went over my head like the NFL shit? But that yoga party hit was LOTB for me, closer was fresh too I havent seen that done before. Pretty sure someone used a metal in the mouth/Joker line in the URL Cypher thread recently so I almost had to leave my love for that out, but it was nice enough to hit. Fraze had the piccolo bar that was a nice wordplay, the shooting craps concept was nice too. The lines over head ish felt stale to me though, rest was either okay or didn't standout for me. I've got Odd winning this, just better execution of his concepts so even the ones I wasn't feeling as much felt at least original or creative enough to warrant quoting. Close match up! __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)