Lotto Smirk vs Remy LeBeau - REMY WINS

Yppih · 07-23-2015, 01:12 AM

Lotto

Bar1-Thought it was cool, couldve hit harder. 2.5/5
Bar2-Cool again. 2.5/5
Bar3-Yeah wording hurt this and not the greatest execution. 1.5/5
Bar4-Wording again was horrid, barely understood what you were trying to say. Wording really messed this bar up for me. 1.5/5
Bar5-Ehhh could've been better. 2/5

Overall-10/25

You started solid and lost steam towards the end.

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Remy

Bar1-I liked it. 3/5
Bar2-W/p was sound. Cool concept. 3/5
Bar3-Cool. 2.5/5
Bar4-Cool. 2.5/5
Bar5-Haha 3/5

Overall-14/25

You were definitely more consistent, first time reading from you. You had fresh concepts though.

v/Remy - He was the attacking force and outmatched his opponents

07-23-2015, 01:12 AM	#5
Yppih Clips.....Ammo Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 126 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 2318590	Lotto Bar1-Thought it was cool, couldve hit harder. 2.5/5 Bar2-Cool again. 2.5/5 Bar3-Yeah wording hurt this and not the greatest execution. 1.5/5 Bar4-Wording again was horrid, barely understood what you were trying to say. Wording really messed this bar up for me. 1.5/5 Bar5-Ehhh could've been better. 2/5 Overall-10/25 You started solid and lost steam towards the end. --------- Remy Bar1-I liked it. 3/5 Bar2-W/p was sound. Cool concept. 3/5 Bar3-Cool. 2.5/5 Bar4-Cool. 2.5/5 Bar5-Haha 3/5 Overall-14/25 You were definitely more consistent, first time reading from you. You had fresh concepts though. v/Remy - He was the attacking force and outmatched his opponents __________________ I don't be trustin these hoes, I just be smashing these hoes...-#RULEnumeroUno