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01-01-2015, 02:48 AM
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brkn lghts
Join Date: Jan 2015
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Hello dull boy. The rap was very good. The dreams line was the best part. That line tied the verse together but it didn't have to be complicated to do it. The sentences rhymed together, but they all could stand by themselves just as easily.
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