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Old 09-23-2014, 01:26 PM   #6
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Baron this was a cool little drop. I feel like I might have read this on rr from you. The opening 4 lines were my favorite. Your rhyming came naturally, except for the "slam of the door//hand as we walk" bit, and I felt the bar for bar rhyming pattern was a bit overdone. Although smoothly worded, just became annoying tbh. Good shit though as always. Prolly read the soab verse today at some point.
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