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Old 09-04-2014, 11:00 AM   #2
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I remember a time, seems like years ago now, where I would open up the Open Mic and damn near every post on the front page was either dope, or at the very least worth a read. Now I open up the Open Mic and see one or two drops that I can read from start to finish. You are not one of them. Your posts are not good. Like not even a little bit. And if you are who I think you are, your other posts weren't good either. I hate leaving feed where I'm doing nothing but saying that someone is just bad, but it needed to be said. Your ideas are not original or creative in anyway, which would be fine if you at least had the slightest grasp of rhyming, but you don't. Each line is predictable and after I read through one of your posts I hate myself because that was time off of my life that I just wasted. My advice to you, would be to keep the "bars" to yourself and edit them because the wording is awful. Go through a couple of edits and then, and only fucking THEN, should you post it. And stop posting so many god damn threads a day. Jesus fucking Christ I need a cigarette.
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