"My phone has more bars than you"
 

Yall scared of this egotistic criticist
Will criticize for an infinite
Til you're obliderized and finished with
You steady dissing my poetry cause you're not a poet
You're a rapper,
I'm a martian you're a fag, and you know it
I'm so potent, that i'll deliver a storm, like zeus
While fucking your mom. Dr. Seuss
I just came but its been too long
I got game but i came too strong
yall scared, whats wrong?
Afraid that this poet will make you long gone
Who cares what yall suckas think
Cause all you do is think and think too long
I'm an egotistical maniac
Crazier than freddy, and that ugly bitch bettie put together
Chasing her to maybe, give that bitch a baby, and a cover

Yall dont even know me yet you've just started a war
Sitting here typing with my back turned to the computer and my eyes on the wall, i could do this in my sleep but i'd rather be concious...Cause I'm Ego

I remember a time, seems like years ago now, where I would open up the Open Mic and damn near every post on the front page was either dope, or at the very least worth a read. Now I open up the Open Mic and see one or two drops that I can read from start to finish. You are not one of them. Your posts are not good. Like not even a little bit. And if you are who I think you are, your other posts weren't good either. I hate leaving feed where I'm doing nothing but saying that someone is just bad, but it needed to be said. Your ideas are not original or creative in anyway, which would be fine if you at least had the slightest grasp of rhyming, but you don't. Each line is predictable and after I read through one of your posts I hate myself because that was time off of my life that I just wasted. My advice to you, would be to keep the "bars" to yourself and edit them because the wording is awful. Go through a couple of edits and then, and only fucking THEN, should you post it. And stop posting so many god damn threads a day. Jesus fucking Christ I need a cigarette.

Lol. Obliderized.

lol

Writing bars is all about imitation. You're doing it wrong.

PROPS BRO!

Keep droppin bro

900% this is muzzle