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08-29-2014, 05:17 PM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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Also, - off topic I could tell dull boy would enjoy since he likes the use of references. Basically to impress dull boy - if nobody has noticed - is to use references. Bags had A TON of them, which - made the verse that much more cut dry, and to the point. To the beer, the type of medicine used and how he used, to pop culture references. All that was coupled pretty well, the rhyming was cool too, but it wasn't anything top tier imo, the transition of topics was also pretty cool too. To impress oats you need to use literary references/techniques. To impress pancake you need to use vocabulary (might I add, smoothly yet precisely). To impress certain you need use a bit of each, but to really impress him you need to stay on topic.
so it goes dull boy - pop references oats - literary references pancake - smooth wording/vocab certain - hyper focus on topic copypat/campbell - crazy rhyme schemes hush/allen - wack textcee short bars vulgar - hyper focused metaphors dead man - crisp, short worded intertwining couplets and thats pretty much what each writer goes for tbh. Me? I'm different. I enjoy everything and can pinpoint why you suck ass. I'm the greatest. I once met shakespeare.
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