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Originally Posted by Sn00p
You're not even that bad. If you battled here some more and started to weed out your played lines, you could become decent. As I said, line wordplay is really old. And that's not a good look. Same with the head south bar. That kinda shit is too simple. But yeah, you have the basics down.
Oh and Kony is from Uganda. Not South Africa. Just a little heads-up.
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Yea well he still terrorizes S Africans (or ar least did)
I aint disagreeing that the verse isn't top notch - definitely aint my best and like I said I wrote that verse very quickly. And I had no info on dude - he has like 5 posts and no info except his location.
I can deal with the criticism - but now you produce something.
03-25-2013, 11:33 AM
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