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Old 11-13-2013, 03:33 AM   #1
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dear diary:


i'm pathologically scarred. mommy issues and a father afar
stop to recall, deep thought between each shot at the bar
composite bizarre - Kurt Nirvonnegut, pause - Mr. misanthropic noir
zombie apocalypse pawn turned neurotic topical star
i've accomplished it all. top of the charts. Raekwon with a dart
when i'm not even focused i'm an unconscious assault
slug swallowing salt, bionic results. Dr. Ockward at heart
spin revolver cylinders as symbiotical parts
Martin Scorsese the sequence. rearrangement, deletion
change as the seasons do. someone gave me a secret
paid me to keep it. I held it in like passive aggressiveness
let it fuel like Acura engines. so erratic the sentences
master malevolent. gas-can to capitol entrances
cancer isn't killing us. it's taxes and prejudice
animal mechanism, alpha-wolfhound, eyes of a dragon
gray steel like metal jackets on a silent assassin
try to imagine - close friends and Vicodin. so it goes
lie in a mattress. close your eyes. die of an overdose
overcoats and services, slow mourning to cry
we're all kids in business casual. see: lord of the flies
cotton-picking porn and chicken, bored into rhyme
endorphins arise like Borgore after snorting a line
aMorpheus prime example of distortion refined
into gorgeous design. rolls royce and porsches to drive
swordsman, the Sai bandit, hanging corpses to dry
like ornaments high on pine monuments, all orphans aside
organisms orbiting sky. procreating, alive
prayer is simple. atheism aims to make you decide
savior divine. grapes for the wine, dinner table at five
bagels are fine - the real question here is: raisin or rye?







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