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Old 02-15-2013, 08:21 AM   #3
Flow
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Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: West Mids
Posts: 3,861
Battle Record: 57-49

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Alright this was I got so far so some directional points or whatever would be nice. To be honest I am only really happy with the first one at the moment, just playing with different ideas.

We charging for him to see Ill? cus he about to witness it
Only time your name is next to skill fo real is in this title bitch

im not usually one for gay jokes player
but he aint named after anger its an anagram of gayer

im pickin up steel beams you cant even pick up yo bars
you ill? you couldnt spit sick even if you were riddled wit sars

You hot? easy to put rayging fire out fella
I extinguish the weak while i sit around and wait for better

Ill show you Rayge cus son yo concepts played
Everyone of them punches belongs in the closed battles thread where they were made

After Bruce Waters an Camp Bell you still think you can blow up?
Bitch they didnt have a single punch an you were too pussy to show up

rayge you aint explosive, you a dud dude, understand?
you couldnt blow even if team orc all gave you a hand

Seen some of your battles bitch - yo concepts overplayed
heard them more then psy's gangnam style, and the wanteds glad you came



to be honest looking back only the first one seems any good
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