FUCK YOUR FEELINS AN EXPECTATIONS IM REELIN IN DESECRATION

Natural · 08-29-2013, 03:53 PM

Your getting better at rhyming and upping the complexity of your flow....I see improvements in that area every time I read a drop of yours.

Your in a newborn stage of writing tbh. I have been there. Where rhyming different sounds and shit is the main focus....and I say keep playing with different rhymes and sounds....cuz only after you find how you want to be and sound can you form your own style and then let your content begin to shine.

Your content is definitely the weak link here. But hey elevation is elevation...if anyone hates on that....ignore it..

I remember I wrote something like this

I splatter the brain matter and batter em, straight splattering

^lol back when I was simply messing with words

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08-29-2013, 03:53 PM	#11
Natural Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 659 Rep Power: 0	Your getting better at rhyming and upping the complexity of your flow....I see improvements in that area every time I read a drop of yours. Your in a newborn stage of writing tbh. I have been there. Where rhyming different sounds and shit is the main focus....and I say keep playing with different rhymes and sounds....cuz only after you find how you want to be and sound can you form your own style and then let your content begin to shine. Your content is definitely the weak link here. But hey elevation is elevation...if anyone hates on that....ignore it.. I remember I wrote something like this I splatter the brain matter and batter em, straight splattering ^lol back when I was simply messing with words I