Audio Writing

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insightful feedback only please, and no clowns if avoidable lol

imma do my first audio in a minute - and having made the transition from text to audio writing a while back, it wasnt as seemless as i expected.

but in terms of strictly 'audio lyricism' - i think i was improving my audio writing by my last drop (last summer), but any feedback on what i should work on this time around? in terms of flow/etc




i'll worry about my voice and shit when im on the verge of becoming famous yo lol, until then i'll work on whats more readily in my control ;)