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07-21-2013, 08:48 AM
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Yesssss... Let the paragraphs flow through you
syncopated. like that shit. the opener was strongest, though "island life taught us life was stupid" and "I'm a guy whose shoes is tied with toothpicks" were two above average lines. didnt change up your schemes enough, paragraphs feel stale if you're not shuffling them around enough good shit, ill be watching you...
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