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Old 11-16-2014, 05:10 AM   #5
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This was a dope piece my friend, it started a little slow, the first 4 lines felt a little disjointed like you weee trying to find a rhythm to roll with, that happens to me often, but once you found it the shit was seamless dude, some very clever and witty (ahem) lines and the flow was smooth as silk bytter on a baby's bottom. Sometimes there is a criticism aimed at pieces like this which are so rhyme focused that they can be lacking in content but that does not apply here, great rhymes, great content, great piece. Thanks for the read bro.
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