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Mr. J 11-10-2014 02:03 AM

Milli Vanilli, Willie & Chillie, Billie Idol on Weed
 
I mean lyrically to mimic me just sickens me
a hit a weed I'm pennin' these wizardries
listening to 9th Wonder spinnin cuts from the.70's
memory quadrant envisionin' words so heavenly
Wrote seven scriptures rode lines like 7 seas
vent a piece send a creature to his death
the feature, the teacher there to keep correct
I defeat ya set I lift ya bars like weaker reps
don't lie...I complete ya breath, keep ya head
I'm the reason sleep helps these dreamers step
I'm mean, I'm best kept in ya deepest secrets...
breh! No need to sweat I'm ya solar plexus
call me Atlas that's how I roll, hold a second..
these bold discretions can all get blown relentless
I ain't braggin' bout cannons, Hulk Hogan..impression
I'm known to perplex those old contestants
Arose to perfection...a blunt tightly rolled, ascension
I got to leave it alone but I just broke the tension
Packed a bowl I crept in...Galaxies that hold dimensions
I make an illusion of it all, then I awoke the senses
And whispered your meaning in a broken message
.....huh?

CopyPat 11-10-2014 02:12 AM

hahahaha

Dope.

Witty 11-11-2014 08:04 AM

@Mr J If I haven't got to this by tomorrow send me a reminder plz, I definitely will tho unless it slips my mind.

Mr. J 11-15-2014 09:47 PM

@Witty

Witty 11-16-2014 05:10 AM

This was a dope piece my friend, it started a little slow, the first 4 lines felt a little disjointed like you weee trying to find a rhythm to roll with, that happens to me often, but once you found it the shit was seamless dude, some very clever and witty (ahem) lines and the flow was smooth as silk bytter on a baby's bottom. Sometimes there is a criticism aimed at pieces like this which are so rhyme focused that they can be lacking in content but that does not apply here, great rhymes, great content, great piece. Thanks for the read bro.

Exis 11-16-2014 08:42 AM

First half was anal, no hate...second half was dope...take from that what you will.

Coup 11-20-2014 07:38 PM

This was like walking into a conversation halfway through


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