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Old 10-04-2018, 03:40 PM   #2561
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no energy to talk to paralytical bores,
granted, that's one of my analytical flaws:
being too quick to judge is the same ill
i'd criticize an individual for. but i am human,
i am movement, also still. master. student.
tracing my life story in the sands of anubis.
in this game of life, play with dice
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i've had the influence of first man's ancient rites,
ain't it nice? mapping the blueprints
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Old 10-04-2018, 10:43 PM   #2562
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Egotistical spit lathers the lip of a lie
Tip of the hat as saliva drips from ya eye
Wit forgoes the gap & hops into the rift
Kids love Eminem & think Hopsin is a gift
Emotions torn & tattered, go warn an actor..
A bunch of jokes with no forms of laughter.
I simulate life, assimilate liars & roast them on a fire
Barbed, dived in an ocean of wire, struggling...
Hopeless & tired...
Your devotion is admired...
Psalms read at the pew for congressional use.
Trump spilled his juice & ran amok like you...
Feeling safe behind the pen, forgetting the lens
Stare back into your soul, this is where rebirth begins
A tree grows from limbs planted beneath the surface.
The mind is scattered but the ride along was perfect
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Old 10-04-2018, 10:49 PM   #2563
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No innocence, Bambi's mood swings
Visible for the world to see - Barbie's prude limbs
A cardinal's new Benz with remarkable blue tinted windows

and the Olsen Twins are in the backseat

of the religious backstreets and their position's that meek, because once they catch the attention of a Quinnipac priest he'll try to pinch an asscheek. This isn't just a shitty rapsheet. I see it in the news all the time, like new Columbines of what got ratings up from some viral hits from last week.


Goner of the echoes, gonorrhea sex shows, confesses and he's obviously a pedo. Courtroom's loud, can't separate the apologies and bellows

but who's an accomplice to this fellow? The entire church or the entire Earth for being idle jerks or is it harder to diagnose than that... and we're wearing tighter jeans and tighter shirts because the cyber turf has extended and our life's work is commended in Instagram boxes. I thought Ip Man was supposed to be conscious. Not hopelessly watching as a sobering caucus of overly admonished convents probe through crotches. Someone Goku PONCH 'em

Every time I see it on the news, I wince. And I'll probably see it on the news again
What's the solution then?

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Old 10-05-2018, 12:05 AM   #2564
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I'm fresher than optometrist specialty drop water is. Mentally off charts with the Pedigree dawg....chompin bits. Rhymin like peppers in hot sauce with extra srirach on it. My sentences hot boxed, the letters are all fog: You fellas get launched off whenever you haul off of it. Especially Bob Marley texting that I'm dropping, an exodus. The pressure just dawns on me, then I let it rip. The veteran, all army specialist bomb dropping this excellence. I'm Paul Coffey with Gretzky sick, dog vomit and strep with spits. Nonstop with the death I'm just, beating a dead horse like the autopsy was negative.
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Old 10-05-2018, 07:53 PM   #2565
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my life
my skills
my prospect
connect with
bits in pieces
acknowledge the intellect
combined with this wisdom
knowledge
while i mediate on regret
all the way to my first cassette
one
two bringing the mic check
I been brought it to full effect while suckas stood there and they just got wrecked
tapes paper recorded my tapes on deck
dj mix master pioneered from my perspect...
ive
hip hop
house music
I gotta live
this atmosphere had me abusing the rib
attempting to be that one ill kid...
...to be continued. ..

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Old 10-11-2018, 02:09 AM   #2566
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You’re another guy whose lifeline is gettin blindly wasted since your whole life’s a lie cuz your storyline is basic. I’m abrasive like aphasia on the brains of special faces. Jogged my memory just to run out of breath. You’ve adopted remedies that would kill me to death. I’m handcuffed to my heart like I’m under arrest. You’re a lip that is cleft, with intellect that’s inept. So I do what I can to collect up a check so I can get myself up outta here and find self-respect
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Old 10-11-2018, 05:19 PM   #2567
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Old 10-12-2018, 10:36 AM   #2568
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Old 10-12-2018, 10:41 AM   #2569
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Old 10-12-2018, 11:48 AM   #2570
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Shawty ain’t silver
This bitch is gold
Untold, bunked low
In the cut like blood flows
I’m sick
I need a doctor
Syringes toxic
I’m noxious
Dropped 6
In a liter
Stomach cleaner
Don’t needa vomit

2 cups, 1 bottle
Dark purple, bitch swallow
Bullets hollow, from chicago
Beat switch & ima follow

Scripts, pills on deck
I’ma vet who’s locked up
Top secret project
Pop n’ keep it Loch Ness
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Bitch extra trippin
Switch in the Expidition
Bet I’m driven
I don’t smoke Bull shit
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Old 10-19-2018, 12:39 AM   #2572
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slide off that pork salad i learn to balance the salts and solvents
now hunger is controlled less is more skinny is light and gold
gets me threw the doors in higher forms arch angels write the law
falcon eye 33 candels hammertimes bottle rockets in the ballentines
eat the flesh the camel hide which you divide and soak
knowing what i know makes me desire to sleep alone
read minds and let will do the rewire if need b
see 3d physics formulate math within a green screen
cut myself in lucidity and bleed dreams
quija boards speak when they see me invisable species
its a different turn of events higher energy suspends
captivating content waiting for consent to send
a sin for a sign to align your world to spin
dont let your bodyparts influence your mind within
you remain I am dead or alive aware that self is less
hive minds of suggestive streets lined with contestants
yet to eat i just gave up and let the weight drop
spirits circle shooters who get shot its a eerie noise
you charged now like a hairy pussy thats really moist
you never really had a choice you wanted flesh and a voice
formed out the lust born on a cusp lunar eclipses fall unto us
on instances less magnificent my balls bout to bust
im always good where I sit the whip or the bus
persistent infinite bliss blitz and shock will snicker the nut
mephisto metaphysics place your apex on the image
mental light design a prismatic net elements
gather around to suggest manifestion comence
with stars suns and moons spinning eyes in a world
which splits the 1 and 2's....

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Old 10-19-2018, 08:05 PM   #2573
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I show pity I show grace.
forgive those who sin against me refraining from disrupting their comfortable place
I move at a considerable pace breath exhale the beautiful race presenting you with trace just in case you get lost on exactly what may be your fate strike against me you and you'll get a left with a bitter aftertaste laced with freebase simply because the full element you won't be able to stand a taste therefore I leave with the chaser to down the case be dismiss u petty misfits acting up behave the master trades his property so remain the slave shackled what is it exactly that your trying to grapple?
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now compose yourself as you start to decompose
star fire bring heat to a billion souls
call me prometheous alien breed
mixed with jesus and pharaohs
forbidden fruit annunaki lizard tooth
gemstone for lesser knowns
apparel with insignias
gun battles in libya low kick shatter your tibia
throwing frisbees at you bill bixbys still shitty
cumming on some milf tittys feeling real iffy
no fear but gods will strictly reduce me to somthing higher
desires acquired to know doing my part is the eye up in the O
my entire mind glows like bonfires in the snow
lightning strikes the ocean designing with motion
devotion of a sacred drip lit the moment
omit the potent chosen one on the alter pulled his heart out
trojan horse infiltrate war route eagle keep the claws down
time will roll it's course laughing you off the map
getting zapped like a fly in a false illusion you fail to react and ask why
is that im tapping into a source connected loss the ethics bitch im bored
you get it opinions across the screen reddit...
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scenes I can never forget stay cemented in place
as I blink away the dryness in silence and stare into space
each revolves like a picture as I examine role and reason
weighing between what's brought us here and in this season
it's different in each instant, like distinct impressions of each Christmas
defeat gift lists and make ones for gratitude.
so you can improve.
the worst you got is one last chance to lose.
we're like record players that dance to grooves
you got one less with every breath
every time your chest can move
so what's the test my dude
we either die tryin or lay dyin, so stay smilin'
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keep smiling you might get your cheek cut
why so serious cause homey
jokers get beat up
knew i was nice after 83 re ups
shorty with the teacup poodle
lets me fuck when i need a piece of strudel

temptation is a must now feel the rush
you quitten aint no different from all of us
the walls are bugged my every thoughts a drug
and every corner you turn learn the loss of love
its the law of such orders that only the strong get done

beg for forgiveness once you start to forget
looking to give as you came to collect
now you wanna be saved but its too late you slept
consume the taste of flesh sewer waist is west
its skull and crossbones
old souls resurrect with different torsos
crossovers got your ankle breaking
thinking you hype pussy you just ankle shaking
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the ability to turn it around and make it racist,
i can summon crowds to different places
shut traffic down and have you exasperated
with baseless accusations i can
take aim at your background and launch an investigation
have your privacy invaded
having a sit down
interviewing the guys and girls you've dated
being robbed by government agents when your computer and cell phone get confiscated
every word you saying will be taken out of contexts so you can be assassinated
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Get at em early like a coffee stain..
Watch them kick shit in the shadows like Johnny Cage
Their best attempt is probably lame.
You get a 1/4 of me, you dont want this change
It's all Gucci mane, Waka Flocka flame.
With next month coming ya gift is on the way.
New Year's got MCs hammered, gotta pray.
I'm sorry did you have something you got to say.

Professional set up where my desk was
Coffee, Peppermint, Chestnut, another fresh cup
Hubris of a nuisance from the foot to the neck cuff
You milk this a lot eh? But you ain't touching a breast...
Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...
Homey dumb dumb with the humdrum & yum yum...
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