Much ado about nothing. 1

Geno · 02-06-2018, 06:16 PM

I collect fragments of bone, scattered and broke
From the cemetery plots, where i clap.at the ghosts
Used to have bad habbits, i cant laugh cause its.sick
I seen a cabbage get split, and d.n.a. splattering shit
Assault and battery tip, cause its a cold, dark ass night
It hits you like a car crash, ats when you've lost at life
S'why i keep a sharp ass knife, always clipped to my jeans
And you dont know shit, if you cant get what that means
Its a planet of snakes, that cant wait to leave u stranded & taken
Id rather leave the canister blazin', before i let a amateur take it
I used to stay bent, but now i gotta be sharper than that
Feel like im on the hardest of paths, with a fuckin target on back
U never catch me walkin the tracks, i rather creep when its black
I do my dirt and make my moves when most people at naps
Lethal with bats and cold.steel, i will beat you with both
Then ill leave you alone, screamin out, please get me home

Nick James · 02-07-2018, 04:01 AM

S'why i keep a sharp ass knife, always clipped to my jeans
And you dont know shit, if you cant get what that means
Its a planet of snakes, that cant wait to leave u stranded & taken
Id rather leave the canister blazin', before i let a amateur take it

^ dope

decent shit overall

sral · 02-07-2018, 10:07 AM

felt the beginning more so than the end on some dark and morbid shit

lines got a lil longer as it went on but this was straight

Geno · 02-07-2018, 10:32 AM

Ya idk. I been listenin to killah priest again recently and every time.i.do.i get inspired to write. But this wierd shit.come.out. it aint much. Buch thanks for.the reaponses tho.guys

CopyPat · 02-13-2018, 02:17 AM

hahahhaha pretty oldschool street vibe, i can appreciate this for what it is, i think written very quickly, just getting thoughts down, making shit rhyme nicely, content cohesive. i've seen you at much higher levels than this but i still enjoyed it, glad you're still around homie!!

02-06-2018, 06:16 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Much ado about nothing. 1 I collect fragments of bone, scattered and broke From the cemetery plots, where i clap.at the ghosts Used to have bad habbits, i cant laugh cause its.sick I seen a cabbage get split, and d.n.a. splattering shit Assault and battery tip, cause its a cold, dark ass night It hits you like a car crash, ats when you've lost at life S'why i keep a sharp ass knife, always clipped to my jeans And you dont know shit, if you cant get what that means Its a planet of snakes, that cant wait to leave u stranded & taken Id rather leave the canister blazin', before i let a amateur take it I used to stay bent, but now i gotta be sharper than that Feel like im on the hardest of paths, with a fuckin target on back U never catch me walkin the tracks, i rather creep when its black I do my dirt and make my moves when most people at naps Lethal with bats and cold.steel, i will beat you with both Then ill leave you alone, screamin out, please get me home __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

02-07-2018, 10:07 AM	#3
sral LARSLARSLARSLARSLARS Join Date: Aug 2014 Location: CRUMPETVILLE Posts: 8,608 Battle Record: 28-3 Champed - Gimmick Battle League - The Winter Topical - Topical Martyrs - Lime Green Poetry Association - Lyric Olympics - Art of Writing League - Guerrilla Writing League (2x) - Black August II Rep Power: 85899396	felt the beginning more so than the end on some dark and morbid shit lines got a lil longer as it went on but this was straight __________________ - Netcees Rebuttal Tourney - Art of Writing League (x 4) - AOWL Season 11 Champion (Undefeated Season)

02-07-2018, 10:32 AM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Ya idk. I been listenin to killah priest again recently and every time.i.do.i get inspired to write. But this wierd shit.come.out. it aint much. Buch thanks for.the reaponses tho.guys __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

02-13-2018, 02:17 AM	#5
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	hahahhaha pretty oldschool street vibe, i can appreciate this for what it is, i think written very quickly, just getting thoughts down, making shit rhyme nicely, content cohesive. i've seen you at much higher levels than this but i still enjoyed it, glad you're still around homie!! __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

02-07-2018, 04:01 AM	#2
Nick James death to amen Join Date: Jan 2018 Posts: 1,279 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 7423718	S'why i keep a sharp ass knife, always clipped to my jeans And you dont know shit, if you cant get what that means Its a planet of snakes, that cant wait to leave u stranded & taken Id rather leave the canister blazin', before i let a amateur take it ^ dope decent shit overall