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Geno 02-06-2018 06:16 PM

Much ado about nothing. 1
 
I collect fragments of bone, scattered and broke
From the cemetery plots, where i clap.at the ghosts
Used to have bad habbits, i cant laugh cause its.sick
I seen a cabbage get split, and d.n.a. splattering shit
Assault and battery tip, cause its a cold, dark ass night
It hits you like a car crash, ats when you've lost at life
S'why i keep a sharp ass knife, always clipped to my jeans
And you dont know shit, if you cant get what that means
Its a planet of snakes, that cant wait to leave u stranded & taken
Id rather leave the canister blazin', before i let a amateur take it
I used to stay bent, but now i gotta be sharper than that
Feel like im on the hardest of paths, with a fuckin target on back
U never catch me walkin the tracks, i rather creep when its black
I do my dirt and make my moves when most people at naps
Lethal with bats and cold.steel, i will beat you with both
Then ill leave you alone, screamin out, please get me home

Nick James 02-07-2018 04:01 AM

S'why i keep a sharp ass knife, always clipped to my jeans
And you dont know shit, if you cant get what that means
Its a planet of snakes, that cant wait to leave u stranded & taken
Id rather leave the canister blazin', before i let a amateur take it

^ dope

decent shit overall

sral 02-07-2018 10:07 AM

felt the beginning more so than the end on some dark and morbid shit

lines got a lil longer as it went on but this was straight

Geno 02-07-2018 10:32 AM

Ya idk. I been listenin to killah priest again recently and every time.i.do.i get inspired to write. But this wierd shit.come.out. it aint much. Buch thanks for.the reaponses tho.guys

CopyPat 02-13-2018 02:17 AM

hahahhaha pretty oldschool street vibe, i can appreciate this for what it is, i think written very quickly, just getting thoughts down, making shit rhyme nicely, content cohesive. i've seen you at much higher levels than this but i still enjoyed it, glad you're still around homie!!


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