Lotto Smirk (2-0) vs Jayson Fresh (0-1) - Jayson Fresh WINS

[Cred]

NBL Season 10
Week 3

Due SUNDAY 12/04/16

Minimum - 10 lines
Max - 20 lines

- NO BITING
- NO FEEDING
- NO SWAYING
- AGREE ON LINE LIMIT


Don't edit after your opponent has posted.
2nd person to post can't edit after the 1st vote comes in.
Don't be an idiot.
Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle.
May God have mercy on your souls!

[Lotto Smirk]

In how many?

[Jayson Fresh]

hey man lets do 12.

i'll send mine to Super Cred in the next 10 mins.

[Cred]

Got 12 from @Jayson Fresh

@Lotto Smirk

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Jayson Fresh's Verse


now that the rust is off, lets get to work..

aaiyo these models all over fresh got dat casanova swag dogg
u one ugly motherfucker.,. da only dimes lotto gets r used for scratch offs
watch ya organs dangle; these blades'll open ya cavity
leave u so empty inside it'll hav daddy issues & grow up to giv hand jobs in back alleys
look u a nobody .., fresh set the tone when i engage rivals
grab u by the spine & blow out ya disc like skeet shooting with air rifles
write a dope verse,, come creative or raw cuz u garbage as fuck son
Just gimme one solid line & I swear i won't pray ur car drifts across one
one look at ya shitty verse & da entire league'll cease breathin'
Cuz da only one praying for a lotto win is his wife so she can finally leave him.
How u want it ? ducktape ya mouth shut with a wire to detonate a bomb
or keep a knife lodged in till this pussy's done bleedin out.. menopause.

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Lotto Smirks Verse


u a lazy writer, dope? nah u lacking that attribute
battled w/ CBA n it looked like u wrote ur verse w/ that attitude
fuck this white supremacist fag got a gun to dump this phene
far from a mad dogg but I'll put a end to him supporting trumps regime
beat this alias so bad police'll have to move him to a different section
but ya hide from ya real name so much it'll be easy for witness protection
swift w/ the aim weapon control'll manage the damage
shots'll leave ya body laying pefectly still it'll beat any manequin challenge
if I chose u as a wwe manager, it ain't a debate when
u hyped up a match to lose n it had u looking like Paul hayman
I'm flashing guns w/ lasers on, u poor as fuck n that a bad look
if u see the heater w/ the red light on it then u probably had your gas cut

[Chemist]

aaiyo these models all over fresh got dat casanova swag dogg
u one ugly motherfucker.,. da only dimes lotto gets r used for scratch offs
watch ya organs dangle; these blades'll open ya cavity
leave u so empty inside it'll hav daddy issues & grow up to giv hand jobs in back alleys

vs

beat this alias so bad police'll have to move him to a different section
but ya hide from ya real name so much it'll be easy for witness protection

weak match,
thought jayson just had one more line
that i thought was frsher
lottos wording and set up
really werent topnotch here
MVGT jf

[Maximus]

i got Jayson here with the opener and the empty inside line and Lotto had no standout line to me tbh, setups and punches werent worded well at all which is something i apparently struggle with also lol.. anyways keep at it cos ive seen better from u. jf for the W here

[Reza]

Ok... I got jayson winning here..

His first 6 bars were the difference here. Although his verse did drop off towards the end. I was digging the empty inside and Casanova lines. But the lotto nameplays got kinda old as the verse went on. Lotto ur wording was atrocious. You had a few decent concepts but the wording hurt. Got where you were headed with the mannequin line but the wording killed it.

[Defiant]

Scratch offs
Daddy issues
Lotto win

Vs

Cba
Paul hey man

Good battle, I like the two quoted from lotto better than anything from jayson but his misses were worse than anything from jay. Real close lotto could a got this with another nice line but I gotta give it to jayson for a more consistent verse


Vote jayson fresh

[Barcotic]

jay
opener hit
empty inside was decent
blow out ya disc was coo
solid line lol

not feelin the rest

vs

lotto
see BA was nice, feels like it's played tho
closer was cool

in between missed, mostly too simple

v/jayson

[Destroyer]

Got fresh here
Lotto needed to come a bit harder
Fresh best was probably that opener, though I'd be surprised if it wasn't played already on him
His closer was decent
This was close but

V/jf