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09-07-2016, 08:20 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2013
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Howzdat?
Ayo
A suggestion, Best get used to it brethren You's just a student I've mentored Ex tests every nuisance who steps forth with a bunch of utensils that sever Left more than wounded on text boards, I can take you out for like ever minus the approval from parents Fully break shit down in a second without the usage of leg kicks I once cracked up a bitches face with my funny bone 'cause she say "Your amusing me Exis" I swear Ima loosen this neck grip once the noose apprehends it I elusive on entrance, You'll get thrown thru the exit quicker than I just manouvered my presence here The movements of legends, This God like path that my being's on you have tragically never veered You ain't done boosted the leverage, Haphazardness forever near A crack addicts spit is never clear I'm Bradman-esque The average is A stat based fact to back what's said While the average head in here spits assonance And is past their best like in every sense I very rarely seldom fear who I be matched against As ninety nine point nine four percent of you bitches Seem content with your lyrics from a dyslexic position I'm exceptionally gifted kid Your considered pathetic, Every edited written submitted from you is just a miserable effort. |
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09-07-2016, 05:19 PM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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did not like this at all.
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09-07-2016, 05:21 PM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
Rep Power: 8599682 |
read it with a canibus type inflection and it seemed better than when I read it for its content. There it seems okay. But definitely lacks anything of real substance, something clever, deep, and enviable. Something that I said I wish I could have wrote. Which never happens, but, maybe one day.
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09-07-2016, 08:34 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2013
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Could of said the scheme was aight bitch lol, nah thanks.
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09-15-2016, 11:27 PM
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rhyme capsule.
Join Date: Sep 2018
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this wasn't bad, ex. reminded me of copywrite a bit. not the content, more the dogged rhythm.
i would note that i can use assonance, am not dyslexic, and can write stuff that's objectively good even if a bit miserable. |
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09-16-2016, 01:04 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 3,934
Battle Record: 3-3
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Lol...my nigga, just bear in mind everything I spit is keyed...always has been & always will be.
I'll hit your latest up shortly... lol @ Copywrite (that's like comparing you to Vanilla Ice) I'm not influenced by homo's bro :) |
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