Howzdat?
 

Ayo

A suggestion,
Best get used to it brethren
You's just a student I've mentored
Ex tests every nuisance who steps forth with a bunch of utensils that sever
Left more than wounded on text boards,
I can take you out for like ever minus the approval from parents
Fully break shit down in a second without the usage of leg kicks
I once cracked up a bitches face with my funny bone 'cause she say "Your amusing me Exis"
I swear Ima loosen this neck grip once the noose apprehends it
I elusive on entrance,
You'll get thrown thru the exit quicker than I just manouvered my presence here
The movements of legends,
This God like path that my being's on you have tragically never veered
You ain't done boosted the leverage,
Haphazardness forever near
A crack addicts spit is never clear
I'm Bradman-esque
The average is
A stat based fact to back what's said
While the average head in here spits assonance
And is past their best like in every sense
I very rarely seldom fear who I be matched against
As ninety nine point nine four percent of you bitches
Seem content with your lyrics from a dyslexic position
I'm exceptionally gifted kid
Your considered pathetic,
Every edited written submitted from you is just a miserable effort.

did not like this at all.

read it with a canibus type inflection and it seemed better than when I read it for its content. There it seems okay. But definitely lacks anything of real substance, something clever, deep, and enviable. Something that I said I wish I could have wrote. Which never happens, but, maybe one day.

Could of said the scheme was aight bitch lol, nah thanks.

this wasn't bad, ex. reminded me of copywrite a bit. not the content, more the dogged rhythm.

i would note that i can use assonance, am not dyslexic, and can write stuff that's objectively good even if a bit miserable.

Lol...my nigga, just bear in mind everything I spit is keyed...always has been & always will be.

I'll hit your latest up shortly... lol @ Copywrite (that's like comparing you to Vanilla Ice) I'm not influenced by homo's bro :)