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Old 08-28-2016, 09:15 PM   #1
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Old 08-28-2016, 10:48 PM   #2
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Old 08-29-2016, 08:36 AM   #3
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gun bar king?

bitch u never been a goon, if I discredit cuz I dont believe ANYTHING you do..
aint no respect in this for you, so imma catch ya in the A.M and give Cred it where its dew

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Old 09-01-2016, 11:30 PM   #4
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45 n a 40 'll smother his brain, shoot em up til hes covered in flames
Fuck the remains. 2 horns pointed at ur head have u meet the 1 u were named

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Old 09-01-2016, 11:46 PM   #5
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CRED got it. Diablo was muddled & played.
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Old 09-01-2016, 11:48 PM   #6
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I have Cred here.

Havent seen diablo's but cred was harder and straight to the point. cred it where its due was a cool idea.. but in a 2 line battle im going w/ impact here. thats where creds hit more home for me.

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Old 09-01-2016, 11:51 PM   #7
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Diablo's was too wordy and played on Cred


Horns used as a term for guns is new to me & I think that was a reach but it wasn't bad

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Old 09-02-2016, 04:48 PM   #8
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I liked both bars here. but creds was harsher

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Old 09-02-2016, 04:53 PM   #9
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Both were pretty fresh..

Cred had a lil more creativeness in word play here...

D had a hard hitter tho... came down to cleaner set up cuz both punches about the same impact

Gotta roll wit Cred

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Old 09-02-2016, 06:13 PM   #10
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Diablo came with it unfortunately cred did aswell lol

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Old 09-03-2016, 10:59 AM   #11
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Cred had the more complex line and the better payoff. Diablo, set up and punch were too disparate.
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Old 09-03-2016, 11:58 AM   #12
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Yeah I too thought cred got it. Like inf was saying just had more of an impact...so yeah vote/cred
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Old 09-04-2016, 07:45 PM   #13
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Diablo forced the second internal rhyme, which really muddled up the entire bar in terms of phrasing. The concept was weak, too, though, and undoubtedly played. Cred had an OK concept that was executed very well.

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