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Allen Knight 08-28-2016 09:15 PM

Diablo Vs Cred - CRED WINS
 
NETCEES 1-2 PUNCHLINE LEAGUE SEASON 4

Due Thursday 12pm pacific

Rules: no feeding, swaying, bitting, Recycling.
& dont post in other ppls battles unless its to vote or u'll be booted.

NO EXT, AT ALL.

@Diablo

@Cred

Cred 08-28-2016 10:48 PM

Cash.

Diablo 08-29-2016 08:36 AM

gun bar king?

bitch u never been a goon, if I discredit cuz I dont believe ANYTHING you do..
aint no respect in this for you, so imma catch ya in the A.M and give Cred it where its dew

Cred 09-01-2016 11:30 PM

45 n a 40 'll smother his brain, shoot em up til hes covered in flames
Fuck the remains. 2 horns pointed at ur head have u meet the 1 u were named

@Diablo

Schadenfreude 09-01-2016 11:46 PM

CRED got it. Diablo was muddled & played.

Saint 09-01-2016 11:48 PM

I have Cred here.

Havent seen diablo's but cred was harder and straight to the point. cred it where its due was a cool idea.. but in a 2 line battle im going w/ impact here. thats where creds hit more home for me.

vote cred

Hearder Hearder 09-01-2016 11:51 PM

Diablo's was too wordy and played on Cred


Horns used as a term for guns is new to me & I think that was a reach but it wasn't bad

Vote cred

Cyrax 09-02-2016 04:48 PM

I liked both bars here. but creds was harsher

vote cred

Kin 09-02-2016 04:53 PM

Both were pretty fresh..

Cred had a lil more creativeness in word play here...

D had a hard hitter tho... came down to cleaner set up cuz both punches about the same impact

Gotta roll wit Cred

Nice shit

Inno 09-02-2016 06:13 PM

Diablo came with it unfortunately cred did aswell lol

Cred

Pinot Grij 09-03-2016 10:59 AM

Cred had the more complex line and the better payoff. Diablo, set up and punch were too disparate.

2tripple0 09-03-2016 11:58 AM

Yeah I too thought cred got it. Like inf was saying just had more of an impact...so yeah vote/cred

Certain 09-04-2016 07:45 PM

Diablo forced the second internal rhyme, which really muddled up the entire bar in terms of phrasing. The concept was weak, too, though, and undoubtedly played. Cred had an OK concept that was executed very well.

Vote: Cred


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