Take it in Stride. Mr. J & Geno.

Geno · 05-08-2016, 12:46 PM

Mr. J
Why must they test my stride, bless my eyes
theres no sense in lyin, Im the best without tryin
Im dyin to dine on your cerebral cortex
Ill flip the 6s of evil on your forehead...
delicious morsel, how do I envision torture?
a bucket list written by the witness cornered
I spit out of order but get ripped on quarters...
8ths & dime bags, wheres your mind at?
if I tried that I swear Id be from generation lyin ass
may the deaf follow you on your blind path
cosign that with a seal of approval, deal with you dudes
at what cost? I should pee on you goof troops
you guerillas throw barrels but cant handle hammers
Ill give your girl 2 humps just like the camel standard
why play games? why be these battle rappers?
you dont no static, thats word to the channel jammer
your crew been wacks without the candle...actors...
gat swinging on fools, that baby come with bam bam manners
you get the answer wrong the gak splat after...
got a itchy keypad controlled by 60 erabs
with your gag reflex Im sure you handled plenty of teabags
I swear if any of it made sense it would come with shitty feedback
but thats life, take it with stride...

Geno
everyday im alive, is just another smack in the face with a lie
its mothers day, in my mind, wonder if im my fathers son, different facial designs
no way i could find out what the truth is, its been 7 years and 38 days since he died
afraid i might realize were not related, im blind, im not sure how to say this, i find..
that when i pull mom dukes to the side, her gaze is never aimed at my eyes
traits of a lady who lies, besides, we havnt spoke in some time
since before the stan remake, even though it was a joke to you guys
its hard for me to even open those rhymes, heart broke when i tried
throw the folder aside, is it possible i dont know who the guy..
whos dick i came from really is? or has my imagination been over applied
i mean , im 6"2', hes 5"8', and thats just one example that goes through my mind
i could put the pictures up, ask you folks to decide
but would you take it serious, or think it was a troll of somekind
fuck it, ill just go with the flow of the ride, maybe i wasnt meant to know to survive.

Quarter O · 05-11-2016, 01:01 AM

Yo yo!! .oKAY!!..I see you Mr. J..had sum real nice shit in there..that 6 6 6 on forehead, deaf/blind path, gorrillas hammers, 2 humps..had sum heat rising..u got a little lazy with the syllables at the end i felt..that part could be tightened to flow better.. Geno whaddup.. this shits kinda lopsided....u wrote sum serious shit to what i thought was supposed to be just bars???..im confused..it was a good verse for what it was tho. just way to serious compared to mr j thats all..u always good with that serious shit. good verse from both just was awkward as fuck getting to your verse geno.

Quarter O · 05-11-2016, 01:02 AM

I type a lot,..mybad fellas

Geno · 05-14-2016, 02:36 PM

Lol. Ya i had some on my mind. Sry mr j. Didt meanto go so overboard

emcee squared · 05-15-2016, 05:24 AM

Tight.
J- yours has a kind of aggressive freestyle vibe speciall towards the end of it. i like the 2nd half better than first half. but take it in stride, dont mean the first parts bad. good stuff again
Geno- our resident comma expert. you have a way of illustrating your flow in a nice simple manner, even if the words n rhymes are complex.
Thats a good thing,, some powerful thoughts and rhymes in this verse. you successfully conveyed some 'figurative urgency' with the content.
good works

Exis · 05-15-2016, 12:45 PM

Good shit...I'll break things down tomorrow or sumthin' my peoples.

Stay uppity.

Exis · 05-16-2016, 08:55 PM

Lol @ my rep...J your verse is pretty solid, felt the opening to middle was tight with some nice content & multies...towards the end as another cat mentioned it did get a little lazy, as a whole though it's a good spit man. Geno your one of the most consistent in the OM & have been for a long time now, this was a solid rhyme once again...your simple but effective flow is always a highlight in your pieces, you threw in some nice imagery & thought your word usage was slick, good collab y'all.

My bad can't quote, phone be all brokeback mountain wit it.

Split Eight · 05-22-2016, 08:55 AM

you guerillas throw barrels but cant handle hammers
Ill give your girl 2 humps just like the camel standard

did not feel like Geno was writing for the same collab.. haha

05-08-2016, 12:46 PM	#1
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Take it in Stride. Mr. J & Geno. Mr. J Why must they test my stride, bless my eyes theres no sense in lyin, Im the best without tryin Im dyin to dine on your cerebral cortex Ill flip the 6s of evil on your forehead... delicious morsel, how do I envision torture? a bucket list written by the witness cornered I spit out of order but get ripped on quarters... 8ths & dime bags, wheres your mind at? if I tried that I swear Id be from generation lyin ass may the deaf follow you on your blind path cosign that with a seal of approval, deal with you dudes at what cost? I should pee on you goof troops you guerillas throw barrels but cant handle hammers Ill give your girl 2 humps just like the camel standard why play games? why be these battle rappers? you dont no static, thats word to the channel jammer your crew been wacks without the candle...actors... gat swinging on fools, that baby come with bam bam manners you get the answer wrong the gak splat after... got a itchy keypad controlled by 60 erabs with your gag reflex Im sure you handled plenty of teabags I swear if any of it made sense it would come with shitty feedback but thats life, take it with stride... Geno everyday im alive, is just another smack in the face with a lie its mothers day, in my mind, wonder if im my fathers son, different facial designs no way i could find out what the truth is, its been 7 years and 38 days since he died afraid i might realize were not related, im blind, im not sure how to say this, i find.. that when i pull mom dukes to the side, her gaze is never aimed at my eyes traits of a lady who lies, besides, we havnt spoke in some time since before the stan remake, even though it was a joke to you guys its hard for me to even open those rhymes, heart broke when i tried throw the folder aside, is it possible i dont know who the guy.. whos dick i came from really is? or has my imagination been over applied i mean , im 6"2', hes 5"8', and thats just one example that goes through my mind i could put the pictures up, ask you folks to decide but would you take it serious, or think it was a troll of somekind fuck it, ill just go with the flow of the ride, maybe i wasnt meant to know to survive. __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

05-14-2016, 02:36 PM	#4
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	Lol. Ya i had some on my mind. Sry mr j. Didt meanto go so overboard __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

05-11-2016, 01:01 AM	#2
Quarter O Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 109 Rep Power: 0	Yo yo!! .oKAY!!..I see you Mr. J..had sum real nice shit in there..that 6 6 6 on forehead, deaf/blind path, gorrillas hammers, 2 humps..had sum heat rising..u got a little lazy with the syllables at the end i felt..that part could be tightened to flow better.. Geno whaddup.. this shits kinda lopsided....u wrote sum serious shit to what i thought was supposed to be just bars???..im confused..it was a good verse for what it was tho. just way to serious compared to mr j thats all..u always good with that serious shit. good verse from both just was awkward as fuck getting to your verse geno.

05-11-2016, 01:02 AM	#3
Quarter O Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 109 Rep Power: 0	I type a lot,..mybad fellas

05-15-2016, 05:24 AM	#5
emcee squared senior writer Join Date: Aug 2015 Posts: 437 Rep Power: 0	Tight. J- yours has a kind of aggressive freestyle vibe speciall towards the end of it. i like the 2nd half better than first half. but take it in stride, dont mean the first parts bad. good stuff again Geno- our resident comma expert. you have a way of illustrating your flow in a nice simple manner, even if the words n rhymes are complex. Thats a good thing,, some powerful thoughts and rhymes in this verse. you successfully conveyed some 'figurative urgency' with the content. good works

05-15-2016, 12:45 PM	#6
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Good shit...I'll break things down tomorrow or sumthin' my peoples. Stay uppity.

05-16-2016, 08:55 PM	#7
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Lol @ my rep...J your verse is pretty solid, felt the opening to middle was tight with some nice content & multies...towards the end as another cat mentioned it did get a little lazy, as a whole though it's a good spit man. Geno your one of the most consistent in the OM & have been for a long time now, this was a solid rhyme once again...your simple but effective flow is always a highlight in your pieces, you threw in some nice imagery & thought your word usage was slick, good collab y'all. My bad can't quote, phone be all brokeback mountain wit it.