Take it in Stride. Mr. J & Geno.
 

Mr. J
Why must they test my stride, bless my eyes
theres no sense in lyin, Im the best without tryin
Im dyin to dine on your cerebral cortex
Ill flip the 6s of evil on your forehead...
delicious morsel, how do I envision torture?
a bucket list written by the witness cornered
I spit out of order but get ripped on quarters...
8ths & dime bags, wheres your mind at?
if I tried that I swear Id be from generation lyin ass
may the deaf follow you on your blind path
cosign that with a seal of approval, deal with you dudes
at what cost? I should pee on you goof troops
you guerillas throw barrels but cant handle hammers
Ill give your girl 2 humps just like the camel standard
why play games? why be these battle rappers?
you dont no static, thats word to the channel jammer
your crew been wacks without the candle...actors...
gat swinging on fools, that baby come with bam bam manners
you get the answer wrong the gak splat after...
got a itchy keypad controlled by 60 erabs
with your gag reflex Im sure you handled plenty of teabags
I swear if any of it made sense it would come with shitty feedback
but thats life, take it with stride...

Geno
everyday im alive, is just another smack in the face with a lie
its mothers day, in my mind, wonder if im my fathers son, different facial designs
no way i could find out what the truth is, its been 7 years and 38 days since he died
afraid i might realize were not related, im blind, im not sure how to say this, i find..
that when i pull mom dukes to the side, her gaze is never aimed at my eyes
traits of a lady who lies, besides, we havnt spoke in some time
since before the stan remake, even though it was a joke to you guys
its hard for me to even open those rhymes, heart broke when i tried
throw the folder aside, is it possible i dont know who the guy..
whos dick i came from really is? or has my imagination been over applied
i mean , im 6"2', hes 5"8', and thats just one example that goes through my mind
i could put the pictures up, ask you folks to decide
but would you take it serious, or think it was a troll of somekind
fuck it, ill just go with the flow of the ride, maybe i wasnt meant to know to survive.

Yo yo!! .oKAY!!..I see you Mr. J..had sum real nice shit in there..that 6 6 6 on forehead, deaf/blind path, gorrillas hammers, 2 humps..had sum heat rising..u got a little lazy with the syllables at the end i felt..that part could be tightened to flow better.. Geno whaddup.. this shits kinda lopsided....u wrote sum serious shit to what i thought was supposed to be just bars???..im confused..it was a good verse for what it was tho. just way to serious compared to mr j thats all..u always good with that serious shit. good verse from both just was awkward as fuck getting to your verse geno.

I type a lot,..mybad fellas

Lol. Ya i had some on my mind. Sry mr j. Didt meanto go so overboard

Tight.
J- yours has a kind of aggressive freestyle vibe speciall towards the end of it. i like the 2nd half better than first half. but take it in stride, dont mean the first parts bad. good stuff again
Geno- our resident comma expert. you have a way of illustrating your flow in a nice simple manner, even if the words n rhymes are complex.
Thats a good thing,, some powerful thoughts and rhymes in this verse. you successfully conveyed some 'figurative urgency' with the content.
good works

Good shit...I'll break things down tomorrow or sumthin' my peoples.

Stay uppity.

Lol @ my rep...J your verse is pretty solid, felt the opening to middle was tight with some nice content & multies...towards the end as another cat mentioned it did get a little lazy, as a whole though it's a good spit man. Geno your one of the most consistent in the OM & have been for a long time now, this was a solid rhyme once again...your simple but effective flow is always a highlight in your pieces, you threw in some nice imagery & thought your word usage was slick, good collab y'all.

My bad can't quote, phone be all brokeback mountain wit it.

you guerillas throw barrels but cant handle hammers
Ill give your girl 2 humps just like the camel standard


did not feel like Geno was writing for the same collab.. haha