Allen Knight Vs Fracture - (AK wins)

Allen Knight · 02-08-2016, 03:24 AM

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@Allen Knight @Fracture

Fracture · 02-08-2016, 02:41 PM

Let do 12 then man

Allen Knight · 02-08-2016, 03:27 PM

ight 12, will clean up this thread.

Fracture · 02-08-2016, 03:30 PM

Another apprentice getting testy questioning me
Ur a big easy target. This is Isis at Mardi Gras, with no interest in beads
Allen knight? Night Allen. This faggots backwards
Ur all bark. So u know I'm making paper when I chop u up to have u manufactured
Dudes shooook. Nervous. Unable to express his talent
The piru sent to kill Biggie had less blood pressure than Allen
How can u beat me? Ur sloppy.. Concepts just falter
Even when u put a thot into a bar.. she just leaves with someone not as awkward
Frac is the nicest at this, ur just aiight & that's it
Plus ur a choke artist. Allen could only make a name illustrating heimlich pamphlets
Im a starter, Allens a bench story that made Forrest Gump thrilling
And he knows he'll go out like a losing samurai, it's his gut feeling.

Allen Knight · 02-08-2016, 04:52 PM

stop calling out bags w/ ur weird ass obsession w/ him cuz

he would scorch u ina battle, that plan is tired
fag u try to Marc Anthony he'd light u up & leave this 'Man on fire'
9milly aimed at ya organs pussy, shells hittin ur core now
that Canister ur insides up till everything stored in ur body pours out
ur slut fucks black guys 24/7, at random parks railin it
only reason that ass Gothic is cuz she been filled w/ dark elements
im boding u into retirement, u'll get wrecked w/ ratchets
Yule Log off forever cuz i burnt u alive till ya fuckin careers left in ashes
ur moms sucks me off before i smash, im violent diggin her
that slut kisses the head before i slam it like Bray Wyatt's finisher
rob ur crib w/ a uzi, take the safe off ya table quick
snatch all the Lieutenant & leave a hole in u the size of a Naval Ship

Hush · 02-08-2016, 10:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fracture

Another apprentice getting testy questioning me
Ur a big easy target. This is Isis at Mardi Gras, with no interest in beads
Question me rhymes with beads? Lol wha. The punch itself is just ass
Allen knight? Night Allen. This faggots backwards
Ur all bark. So u know I'm making paper when I chop u up to have u manufactured
Um ok angle is cool setup was funny but punch execution is ehhh what do u mean have him manufactured I never heard someone be manufactured ever
Dudes shooook. Nervous. Unable to express his talent
The piru sent to kill Biggie had less blood pressure than Allen
Fire
How can u beat me? Ur sloppy.. Concepts just falter
Even when u put a thot into a bar.. she just leaves with someone not as awkward
This is horrible
Frac is the nicest at this, ur just aiight & that's it
Plus ur a choke artist. Allen could only make a name illustrating heimlich pamphlets
Kinda cool . Dope ass concept
Im a starter, Allens a bench story that made Forrest Gump thrilling
And he knows he'll go out like a losing samurai, it's his gut feeling.
Fair to decent

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight

stop calling out bags w/ ur weird ass obsession w/ him cuz

he would scorch u ina battle, that plan is tired
fag u try to Marc Anthony he'd light u up & leave this 'Man on fire'
I don't remember the movie too wel so this misses on me
9milly aimed at ya organs pussy, shells hittin ur core now
that Canister ur insides up till everything stored in ur body pours out
Wp not working 2 ways so nah
ur slut fucks black guys 24/7, at random parks railin it
only reason that ass Gothic is cuz she been filled w/ dark elements
Yeah this is wp done right cuz it's fire
im boding u into retirement, u'll get wrecked w/ ratchets
Yule Log off forever cuz i burnt u alive till ya fuckin careers left in ashes
Lol if this was December I might of fucked with this but it just is sloppy wp in February
ur moms sucks me off before i smash, im violent diggin her
that slut kisses the head before i slam it like Bray Wyatt's finisher
Dope af
rob ur crib w/ a uzi, take the safe off ya table quick
snatch all the Lieutenant & leave a hole in u the size of a Naval Ship
Nah

The bray Wyatt line alone won this battle IMO
Allen had a lot of bad wordplay but frac just had a lot of bad wording

The thot/thought shit was just atrocious

V/knight

Schadenfreude · 02-09-2016, 11:33 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fracture

Opener is decent
Bark/paper is weak
Blood pressure is aight
Thot is terrible
Choke artist is played & badly worded
Closer is cool

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight

Opener is cool
Canister is weak
Gothis is ok
Yule log is kinda corny, but aight
Bray Wyatt is nasty
Closer is decent

Overall I expected a whole lot more from y'all tbh. Frac u're stuff's just "dated" & AK u're rusty or lazy or whatever, but I still say ALLEN KNIGHT took it.

Fracture · 02-09-2016, 03:52 PM

That bray Wyatt line was classic

Pinot Grij · 02-11-2016, 04:49 PM

Fracture.
Opener too complicated.
Paper line is ok, but bark is a stretch to get to a line about paper manufacturing.
I don't get piru line.
Thot line is tight.
Heimlich is decent but the rhyme is awkward.
Closer is fire. Subtle but hard.

AK
I guess Anthony is Bags's name?
Cainster was a weird read, needed a couple looks.
Gothic line is fire.
Yule Log woulda been better around Christmas but still funny.
Sister Abigail line is fire.
Lieutenant line is funny.

In a battle of 2 lines I liked vs 2 lines plus some decent ones, I gotta go with AK. Fracture had a couple misses that I couldn't overlook.

Vote -- Allen Knight

ill nik-A · 02-11-2016, 06:21 PM

Frac
I liked the illustrator line thought it was dope

Allen
I'm not a fan of some of the wordplay BUT gothic was great and the sister line was too

I got allen

Certain · 02-11-2016, 07:53 PM

The blood pressure and gothic lines alone made this worth reading. Good job, men.

Wanderer · 02-12-2016, 09:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fracture

Another apprentice getting testy questioning me
Ur a big easy target. This is Isis at Mardi Gras, with no interest in beads
Nah
Allen knight? Night Allen. This faggots backwards
Ur all bark. So u know I'm making paper when I chop u up to have u manufactured
Really liked where this was going and then "to have you manufactured" ruined it cos to me it ain't makin sense
Dudes shooook. Nervous. Unable to express his talent
The piru sent to kill Biggie had less blood pressure than Allen
nice
How can u beat me? Ur sloppy.. Concepts just falter
Even when u put a thot into a bar.. she just leaves with someone not as awkward
Meh
Frac is the nicest at this, ur just aiight & that's it
Plus ur a choke artist. Allen could only make a name illustrating heimlich pamphlets
Fresh man but something about he wording on the punch didn't sit right with me
Im a starter, Allens a bench story that made Forrest Gump thrilling
And he knows he'll go out like a losing samurai, it's his gut feeling
errr not great
.

Vs

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight

stop calling out bags w/ ur weird ass obsession w/ him cuz

he would scorch u ina battle, that plan is tired
fag u try to Marc Anthony he'd light u up & leave this 'Man on fire'
Cool
9milly aimed at ya organs pussy, shells hittin ur core now
that Canister ur insides up till everything stored in ur body pours out
Wording meant I got lost somewhere in this..
ur slut fucks black guys 24/7, at random parks railin it
only reason that ass Gothic is cuz she been filled w/ dark elements
I dig the concept but elements and railing it really don't rhyme for me
im boding u into retirement, u'll get wrecked w/ ratchets
Yule Log off forever cuz i burnt u alive till ya fuckin careers left in ashes
No way
ur moms sucks me off before i smash, im violent diggin her
that slut kisses the head before i slam it like Bray Wyatt's finisher
Dope
rob ur crib w/ a uzi, take the safe off ya table quick
snatch all the Lieutenant & leave a hole in u the size of a Naval Ship
Not really working for me

Got 2 dope hits from Allen and a half hitter vs 1 dope hit : 2 half hits for Fracture. Bray wyatt's finisher LOTB.

V/Allen

joog · 02-12-2016, 10:00 AM

Another apprentice getting testy questioning me
Ur a big easy target. This is Isis at Mardi Gras, with no interest in beads
I LIKED THIS

Allen knight? Night Allen. This faggots backwards
Ur all bark. So u know I'm making paper when I chop u up to have u manufactured
NICE CONCEPTUALLY, BUT THE EXECUTION OF THE COULDA BEEN HARSHER

Dudes shooook. Nervous. Unable to express his talent
The piru sent to kill Biggie had less blood pressure than Allen
THIS IS NICE

How can u beat me? Ur sloppy.. Concepts just falter
Even when u put a thot into a bar.. she just leaves with someone not as awkward
THIS WAS DOPE IMO

Frac is the nicest at this, ur just aiight & that's it
Plus ur a choke artist. Allen could only make a name illustrating heimlich pamphlets
IVE SEEN THIS CHOKE ANGLE DONE A BIT TOO MUCH

Im a starter, Allens a bench story that made Forrest Gump thrilling
And he knows he'll go out like a losing samurai, it's his gut feeling.
IVE SEEN THIS SAMURAI/GUT FEELING A BIT TOO MUCH ALSO. HARD TO AWARD PTS HERE

VS

he would scorch u ina battle, that plan is tired
fag u try to Marc Anthony he'd light u up & leave this 'Man on fire'
ALRIGHT

9milly aimed at ya organs pussy, shells hittin ur core now
that Canister ur insides up till everything stored in ur body pours out
OK, COULDA EXECUTED THAT CAN FLIP A LIL BETTER

ur slut fucks black guys 24/7, at random parks railin it
only reason that ass Gothic is cuz she been filled w/ dark elements
THIS WAS LOLS

im boding u into retirement, u'll get wrecked w/ ratchets
Yule Log off forever cuz i burnt u alive till ya fuckin careers left in ashes
THIS WAS GOOD

ur moms sucks me off before i smash, im violent diggin her
that slut kisses the head before i slam it like Bray Wyatt's finisher
YIKES..

rob ur crib w/ a uzi, take the safe off ya table quick
snatch all the Lieutenant & leave a hole in u the size of a Naval Ship
NAH. I DIDN'T LIKE HOW U DID THIS. BOTCHED CONCEPT IMO

verdict-
Good battle.
Frac, I liked ur creativity for the most part. But ur last two concepts, I've seen done a few times. But your wording and execution was much better.
AK, you was consistent. Only bar I didn't like was your closer.

Vote-ak on consistency

Tic · 02-12-2016, 10:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fracture

Another apprentice getting testy questioning me
Ur a big easy target. This is Isis at Mardi Gras, with no interest in beads
This is ok.
Allen knight? Night Allen. This faggots backwards
Ur all bark. So u know I'm making paper when I chop u up to have u manufactured
Didn't like this.
Dudes shooook. Nervous. Unable to express his talent
The piru sent to kill Biggie had less blood pressure than Allen
Cool.
How can u beat me? Ur sloppy.. Concepts just falter
Even when u put a thot into a bar.. she just leaves with someone not as awkward
Thot/thought no.
Frac is the nicest at this, ur just aiight & that's it
Plus ur a choke artist. Allen could only make a name illustrating heimlich pamphlets
I like this.
Im a starter, Allens a bench story that made Forrest Gump thrilling
And he knows he'll go out like a losing samurai, it's his gut feeling.
Not a fan.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Allen Knight

stop calling out bags w/ ur weird ass obsession w/ him cuz

he would scorch u ina battle, that plan is tired
fag u try to Marc Anthony he'd light u up & leave this 'Man on fire'
Eh ok.
9milly aimed at ya organs pussy, shells hittin ur core now
that Canister ur insides up till everything stored in ur body pours out
Not bad. Doesn't work both ways, but ok.
ur slut fucks black guys 24/7, at random parks railin it
only reason that ass Gothic is cuz she been filled w/ dark elements
This is just weird.
im boding u into retirement, u'll get wrecked w/ ratchets
Yule Log off forever cuz i burnt u alive till ya fuckin careers left in ashes
I like this.
ur moms sucks me off before i smash, im violent diggin her
that slut kisses the head before i slam it like Bray Wyatt's finisher
Dope.
rob ur crib w/ a uzi, take the safe off ya table quick
snatch all the Lieutenant & leave a hole in u the size of a Naval Ship
Idk what this is.

Hmm this was kinda close. Frac had a couple decent lines, but Allen's finisher bar was LOTB for me. That edges it for me.

Allen

Adonis · 02-12-2016, 11:24 AM

Honestly didn't think either ran away with it Due to both lacking that killer dagger. Neither verse was bad, but neither was great either. I liked the thought into a bar line the most, but Allen was more consistent and more polished on a per line basis

V knight

02-08-2016, 03:24 AM	#1
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Allen Knight Vs Fracture - (AK wins) NBL Season 9 Due TUESDAY Minimum - 10 lines Max - 20 lines Line limit can increase if both agree NO biting NO swaying NO feeding NO recycling You must check in Don't edit after your opponent has posted 2nd person to post can't edit after the first vote comes in Don't be an idiot You MUST vote on all battles & post your links in the Voting Thread Don't use your opponent's pic unless it's a pic battle Agree on a line limit May God have mercy on your souls @Allen Knight @Fracture __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

02-08-2016, 03:27 PM	#3
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	ight 12, will clean up this thread. __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

02-08-2016, 04:52 PM	#5
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	stop calling out bags w/ ur weird ass obsession w/ him cuz he would scorch u ina battle, that plan is tired fag u try to Marc Anthony he'd light u up & leave this 'Man on fire' 9milly aimed at ya organs pussy, shells hittin ur core now that Canister ur insides up till everything stored in ur body pours out ur slut fucks black guys 24/7, at random parks railin it only reason that ass Gothic is cuz she been filled w/ dark elements im boding u into retirement, u'll get wrecked w/ ratchets Yule Log off forever cuz i burnt u alive till ya fuckin careers left in ashes ur moms sucks me off before i smash, im violent diggin her that slut kisses the head before i slam it like Bray Wyatt's finisher rob ur crib w/ a uzi, take the safe off ya table quick snatch all the Lieutenant & leave a hole in u the size of a Naval Ship __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

02-11-2016, 04:49 PM	#9
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195064	Fracture. Opener too complicated. Paper line is ok, but bark is a stretch to get to a line about paper manufacturing. I don't get piru line. Thot line is tight. Heimlich is decent but the rhyme is awkward. Closer is fire. Subtle but hard. AK I guess Anthony is Bags's name? Cainster was a weird read, needed a couple looks. Gothic line is fire. Yule Log woulda been better around Christmas but still funny. Sister Abigail line is fire. Lieutenant line is funny. In a battle of 2 lines I liked vs 2 lines plus some decent ones, I gotta go with AK. Fracture had a couple misses that I couldn't overlook. Vote -- Allen Knight __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.

02-11-2016, 06:21 PM	#10
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,420 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164519	Frac I liked the illustrator line thought it was dope Allen I'm not a fan of some of the wordplay BUT gothic was great and the sister line was too I got allen __________________ Grumpy old man.

02-08-2016, 02:41 PM	#2
Fracture Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 1,118 Battle Record: 9-2 Rep Power: 10222953	Let do 12 then man

02-08-2016, 03:30 PM	#4
Fracture Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 1,118 Battle Record: 9-2 Rep Power: 10222953	Another apprentice getting testy questioning me Ur a big easy target. This is Isis at Mardi Gras, with no interest in beads Allen knight? Night Allen. This faggots backwards Ur all bark. So u know I'm making paper when I chop u up to have u manufactured Dudes shooook. Nervous. Unable to express his talent The piru sent to kill Biggie had less blood pressure than Allen How can u beat me? Ur sloppy.. Concepts just falter Even when u put a thot into a bar.. she just leaves with someone not as awkward Frac is the nicest at this, ur just aiight & that's it Plus ur a choke artist. Allen could only make a name illustrating heimlich pamphlets Im a starter, Allens a bench story that made Forrest Gump thrilling And he knows he'll go out like a losing samurai, it's his gut feeling.

02-09-2016, 03:52 PM	#8
Fracture Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2015 Posts: 1,118 Battle Record: 9-2 Rep Power: 10222953	That bray Wyatt line was classic

02-11-2016, 07:53 PM	#11
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	The blood pressure and gothic lines alone made this worth reading. Good job, men.

02-12-2016, 10:00 AM	#13
joog Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 244 Battle Record: 3-1 Rep Power: 1432585	Another apprentice getting testy questioning me Ur a big easy target. This is Isis at Mardi Gras, with no interest in beads I LIKED THIS Allen knight? Night Allen. This faggots backwards Ur all bark. So u know I'm making paper when I chop u up to have u manufactured NICE CONCEPTUALLY, BUT THE EXECUTION OF THE COULDA BEEN HARSHER Dudes shooook. Nervous. Unable to express his talent The piru sent to kill Biggie had less blood pressure than Allen THIS IS NICE How can u beat me? Ur sloppy.. Concepts just falter Even when u put a thot into a bar.. she just leaves with someone not as awkward THIS WAS DOPE IMO Frac is the nicest at this, ur just aiight & that's it Plus ur a choke artist. Allen could only make a name illustrating heimlich pamphlets IVE SEEN THIS CHOKE ANGLE DONE A BIT TOO MUCH Im a starter, Allens a bench story that made Forrest Gump thrilling And he knows he'll go out like a losing samurai, it's his gut feeling. IVE SEEN THIS SAMURAI/GUT FEELING A BIT TOO MUCH ALSO. HARD TO AWARD PTS HERE VS he would scorch u ina battle, that plan is tired fag u try to Marc Anthony he'd light u up & leave this 'Man on fire' ALRIGHT 9milly aimed at ya organs pussy, shells hittin ur core now that Canister ur insides up till everything stored in ur body pours out OK, COULDA EXECUTED THAT CAN FLIP A LIL BETTER ur slut fucks black guys 24/7, at random parks railin it only reason that ass Gothic is cuz she been filled w/ dark elements THIS WAS LOLS im boding u into retirement, u'll get wrecked w/ ratchets Yule Log off forever cuz i burnt u alive till ya fuckin careers left in ashes THIS WAS GOOD ur moms sucks me off before i smash, im violent diggin her that slut kisses the head before i slam it like Bray Wyatt's finisher YIKES.. rob ur crib w/ a uzi, take the safe off ya table quick snatch all the Lieutenant & leave a hole in u the size of a Naval Ship NAH. I DIDN'T LIKE HOW U DID THIS. BOTCHED CONCEPT IMO verdict- Good battle. Frac, I liked ur creativity for the most part. But ur last two concepts, I've seen done a few times. But your wording and execution was much better. AK, you was consistent. Only bar I didn't like was your closer. Vote-ak on consistency

02-12-2016, 11:24 AM	#15
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	Honestly didn't think either ran away with it Due to both lacking that killer dagger. Neither verse was bad, but neither was great either. I liked the thought into a bar line the most, but Allen was more consistent and more polished on a per line basis V knight __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR