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09-26-2015, 07:30 PM
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Join Date: Jul 2013
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Suffocated
Ayo,
I'm here to stretch you to your limits where you'll either snap or bounce back into some excellent position everythin' I text to you is brilliance your continually speakin' in tongues Exis is him you bitches, straight up makin' no sense to me before shit is ripped from your skull I'll make you bleed from the gums like strict parents with soap fed to some mischievous fuck Ima mysterious one the monster under your bed... I'll fuckin' spring from beyond it and leave you bludgeoned to death skeletal structures get crushed whenever I'm touchin' the pen you grade fuckers off desktops and then they son you in threads I'm the type to place mothers in headlocks who've left their youngins unfed you'll end up stuffed in a dead bolted cement cold hell hole box while I think outside of the square It's like you is hidin' in there so I'll count to ten, not as I've heard that silence can scare kids a lot bloody more than a scream could if you wasn't fightin' for air bitch. Last edited by Exis; 09-26-2015 at 07:34 PM. |
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10-09-2015, 04:23 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2013
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Anyone? Lol.
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10-12-2015, 02:11 AM
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Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
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I'll fuckin' spring from beyond it and leave you bludgeoned to death
skeletal structures get crushed whenever I'm touchin' the pen ^^^^ I didnt like how you set this up, I get the idea you went for... but nah, it just felt weird and made me feel like a dirty whore for liking this but you had some enjoyable concepts that made me crack a smile the ending section with the cement cold buildup was pretty cool enjoyable piece, keep writing...
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10-14-2015, 02:35 AM
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Join Date: Jul 2013
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Lol @ feelin' like a dirty whore.
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10-14-2015, 09:39 AM
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Join Date: Aug 2014
Location: CRUMPETVILLE
Posts: 8,605
Battle Record: 28-3
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I'll make you bleed from the gums
like strict parents with soap fed to some mischievous fuck Ima mysterious one the monster under your bed... I'll fuckin' spring from beyond it and leave you bludgeoned to death skeletal structures get crushed whenever I'm touchin' the pen you grade fuckers off desktops and then they son you in threads I'm the type to place mothers in headlocks who've left their youngins unfed that mid section was nicer than pam andersons back in the day liked the switch up around "dead bolted" etc dope shit all round keep that pen moving!
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