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06-15-2015, 11:14 AM
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Junior Member
Join Date: May 2015
Posts: 12
Champed - OM VOTM June 2015
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DON'T STARE AT THE MOON
We all want illusions of control. The feeling of truth in what we know,
but betrayal turns to fail-ure and a ruining of hope when what you believe is so becomes a lucid dream. You woke to you asleep. Now no human being can prove they mean what's spoken. Her promises aren't honest. They may mean well, but she sells preposterous misconduct to everything that we've felt. Forever. Undying. Eternal. I'LL NEVER LEAVE YOU. Save it. This moment's all we'll know and lies needn't be true. My eyes read as see-through, yet I keep a piece to cope and deny. There's no going through life this re-al. So coil around my finger. Succumb to realities I weave in your galaxy of think. I wear this royal crown, as leader. Dating pool shark. Smart with a razor toothed heart. Sometimes I play the fool. 'cause being this way is too hard. Tried to taste the ruse. Wanted to erase my views. Everyday, abused my brain with booze I drank. I'd brood trying to persuade the truth to vacate. I used people as shields. Built a life over graves. But the truth haunted me, and she could see the lie. Open faced. I'm a peculiar brand of what you might call a monster. I've witnessed senses. I've viewed the cause of conscience. It's the idea of ourselves being an ideal of a shell. I feel I'm in hell. I deal with myself as well as I feel I can help. I'm mourning a loss of innocence most don't know existed. |
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06-16-2015, 12:51 PM
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obsessed
Join Date: Nov 2013
Location: fucka idiyote
Posts: 5,709
Battle Record: Faggot-1
Accomplishments - can recite entirety of shrek 2
Champed - tangoed with spider man behind scenes in spider-man 2
- was candidate for gerber baby 3x
- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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bb intrigued. tired of imaginary sparring with deadman and cake. dey 2 ez. BB SALIVATING RITE NOW
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06-18-2015, 12:44 AM
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The Clown Prince
Join Date: Apr 2013
Posts: 5,046
Battle Record: 35-45
Champed - Art of Writing League
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Related to the 'fool' part, can't impress everyone when you think outside the box.
after the first four lines I felt you really picked up steam this is different from the other piece you dropped which I put mytwist on 'cause it seemed fun I think what really stuck out for me was how you wrote it out It reads different from other pieces and has a certain idk mystique to it Either way nice work here breh
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