It's This Way

Exis · 11-04-2014, 06:50 AM

Yo,

I'm emotionless, empty
yet my senses are focused
feelin' like you owe me immensely
will leave your whole skeleton broken
behold a presence that's potent,
honed to perfection I'm homin' directly at who's throwin' to check it
detect your motions and end 'em
the mode's dismember opponents
your just some member that disses guests in an attempt to get noticed
why ass kiss
or ask if
I'm the best when you know it?
I'll axe kick
that there head off your shoulders
back flip
with the machetes I'm holdin'
and then sever your soldiers 'fore they've unholstered their weapons
in an Orient settin'
where the sun's gone from yellow in color
to a reddish orange and settin'
upon the bloody wreckage unfoldin'
in some horrible hell hole that's lookin' opposite heaven
I'm a terrorist rollin' the plane
at the stage
where we outta reckless control of it
until you've gone up in flames
and away
Exis just strolls from it.

Exis · 11-11-2014, 03:49 PM

Oie.....

Mr. J · 11-11-2014, 03:57 PM

It won't die if you bump it to the top

Exis · 11-14-2014, 12:42 AM

...thanks for the comments nigga.

Exis · 11-16-2014, 09:27 AM

Can we get some feed in this bitch, if not I'll let it die.

Witty · 11-16-2014, 10:45 AM

This was dope, good rhyming, nice vibe to the piece.

Good shit.

H4ZE · 11-16-2014, 12:23 PM

This was a cool piece man. Dope flow and rhyming the whole way through. Had an agressive feel to the verse. Not much to say about it but I really enjoyed it. Dope shit. Keep doin you. Peace.

11-04-2014, 06:50 AM	#1
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	It's This Way Yo, I'm emotionless, empty yet my senses are focused feelin' like you owe me immensely will leave your whole skeleton broken behold a presence that's potent, honed to perfection I'm homin' directly at who's throwin' to check it detect your motions and end 'em the mode's dismember opponents your just some member that disses guests in an attempt to get noticed why ass kiss or ask if I'm the best when you know it? I'll axe kick that there head off your shoulders back flip with the machetes I'm holdin' and then sever your soldiers 'fore they've unholstered their weapons in an Orient settin' where the sun's gone from yellow in color to a reddish orange and settin' upon the bloody wreckage unfoldin' in some horrible hell hole that's lookin' opposite heaven I'm a terrorist rollin' the plane at the stage where we outta reckless control of it until you've gone up in flames and away Exis just strolls from it.

11-11-2014, 03:57 PM	#3
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,046 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349682	It won't die if you bump it to the top __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

11-14-2014, 12:42 AM	#4
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	...thanks for the comments nigga. Last edited by Exis; 11-14-2014 at 07:35 PM.

11-16-2014, 10:45 AM	#6
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	This was dope, good rhyming, nice vibe to the piece. Good shit. __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

11-11-2014, 03:49 PM	#2
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Oie.....

11-16-2014, 09:27 AM	#5
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,934 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Can we get some feed in this bitch, if not I'll let it die.

11-16-2014, 12:23 PM	#7
H4ZE Member Join Date: Jan 2014 Location: Florida Posts: 77 Battle Record: 1-2 Rep Power: 0	This was a cool piece man. Dope flow and rhyming the whole way through. Had an agressive feel to the verse. Not much to say about it but I really enjoyed it. Dope shit. Keep doin you. Peace.