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Exis 11-04-2014 06:50 AM

It's This Way
 
Yo,

I'm emotionless, empty
yet my senses are focused
feelin' like you owe me immensely
will leave your whole skeleton broken
behold a presence that's potent,
honed to perfection I'm homin' directly at who's throwin' to check it
detect your motions and end 'em
the mode's dismember opponents
your just some member that disses guests in an attempt to get noticed
why ass kiss
or ask if
I'm the best when you know it?
I'll axe kick
that there head off your shoulders
back flip
with the machetes I'm holdin'
and then sever your soldiers 'fore they've unholstered their weapons
in an Orient settin'
where the sun's gone from yellow in color
to a reddish orange and settin'
upon the bloody wreckage unfoldin'
in some horrible hell hole that's lookin' opposite heaven
I'm a terrorist rollin' the plane
at the stage
where we outta reckless control of it
until you've gone up in flames
and away
Exis just strolls from it.

Exis 11-11-2014 03:49 PM

Oie.....

Mr. J 11-11-2014 03:57 PM

It won't die if you bump it to the top

Exis 11-14-2014 12:42 AM

...thanks for the comments nigga.

Exis 11-16-2014 09:27 AM

Can we get some feed in this bitch, if not I'll let it die.

Witty 11-16-2014 10:45 AM

This was dope, good rhyming, nice vibe to the piece.

Good shit.

H4ZE 11-16-2014 12:23 PM

This was a cool piece man. Dope flow and rhyming the whole way through. Had an agressive feel to the verse. Not much to say about it but I really enjoyed it. Dope shit. Keep doin you. Peace.


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