Textual Healing

CopyPat · 09-28-2013, 02:33 PM

I don’t really have to act like I’m packin
9’s or milly’s, that’s just fact, it’s not happenin
Rhymes are illy, tracks are phat when I crack em
Cause I just really rap to rap about rappin!
The truth when he spat sick, rhyming diseases
Smooth and elaborate, lines of a genius
I do plenty classes, to pilot mc’s cause
Too many rappers just cry in their pieces
The highest achievement is learning to be real
Rhyming is easy if your gonna preach killin
Death n hate, never celebrate
What lies in my feelings is a yearning for peace still
Determined to keep dealin in positivity
My verses are deep, but still in that raw vicinity
I’m earning my keep, skill in the top ability
And nursing mc’s cause they not as ill as me
Honest, it could be some next shit, simply dope
But ya’ll just sit and think I flexed this, since it flows
Common senses seem neglected in ya whole
Persona bitches, this is net shit.. really jokes
Silly old dudes sittin behind a keyboard
Really don’t do what I’m tryin to see more
Spitting oldschool is the rhymes I fiend for
But pity oh gloom is the kinds I read more
And guys just beef or pretend to be hardened
They mindless geeks with their enemy targets
It’s mentally retarded to argue in threads when
Pathetically starving for all the attention
So call me a henchman, cause I slave to the rhythm
But I always impress when displayin a written
Ya probly upset since you played in the system
Why all these defenseman should change their position

da beat:

Certain · 09-28-2013, 02:36 PM

Get 'em.

Frank Metts · 09-28-2013, 10:04 PM

Simple but effective ... not a lot of misdirection straight to the point and we need that some times

e11even · 09-28-2013, 11:38 PM

You should record this if you havent already. This would sound pretty good in audio.

Just Write · 09-29-2013, 10:18 AM

Lol good to see you still beastin it lyrically pat. I enjoyed this... and your long ass drop of cyphers lol. Whats your aim? I'm gunna go download it now. We should cypher a bit. Anyways stay up

Geno · 09-29-2013, 12:11 PM

This was awesome copy
Loved the short bar writing.

Couple lines I dug the most were...

The truth when he spat sick, rhyming diseases
Smooth and elaborate,lines of a genius
I do plenty classes, to pilot mc’s cause
Too many rappers just cry in their pieces

Badweather/geno audio collab coming tonight, lookout for it
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Zen · 09-29-2013, 12:19 PM

Lol at the title. Dope. Pat I've told you before each time I read one of your verses it's like your standing on the corner just freestyling some dope shit and that's what this is. The beat worked great with it too. Nice piece here Pat.

CopyPat · 10-02-2013, 03:14 PM

haha thanks. i tried to do something a little different in this one since everyone just says all my shit are "flex pieces"

Wise Wiggles · 10-02-2013, 04:11 PM

sick as per usual
the positivity scheme was coo
Liked the pity oh gloom line the best, lol. It was funny to me
pce doggggg

Witty · 10-03-2013, 03:39 PM

@Aero

Eŋg · 10-08-2013, 09:58 PM

NAME NAMES, YOU CANUCKIAN MOTHERFUCK

nah. i mean yea. thought this was pretty dope. more or less throughout, no actual trips, just some lines not hitting me like others. it's relative tho.

The truth when he spat sick, rhyming diseases
Smooth and elaborate, lines of a genius
I do plenty classes, to pilot mc’s cause
Too many rappers just cry in their pieces
The highest achievement is learning to be real

(y)ow(zers).

09-28-2013, 02:36 PM	#2
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,066 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899406	Get 'em. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

09-28-2013, 11:38 PM	#4
e11even V.V Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: . Posts: 2,076 Battle Record: 31-20 Rep Power: 6247259	You should record this if you havent already. This would sound pretty good in audio. __________________ Ahem.

09-29-2013, 10:18 AM	#5
Just Write Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,709 Battle Record: 9-12 Rep Power: 4997617	Lol good to see you still beastin it lyrically pat. I enjoyed this... and your long ass drop of cyphers lol. Whats your aim? I'm gunna go download it now. We should cypher a bit. Anyways stay up __________________

09-29-2013, 12:11 PM	#6
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,354 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036761	This was awesome copy Loved the short bar writing. Couple lines I dug the most were... The truth when he spat sick, rhyming diseases Smooth and elaborate,lines of a genius I do plenty classes, to pilot mc’s cause Too many rappers just cry in their pieces Badweather/geno audio collab coming tonight, lookout for it 1 __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

10-02-2013, 03:14 PM	#8
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 708 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742225	haha thanks. i tried to do something a little different in this one since everyone just says all my shit are "flex pieces" __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

09-28-2013, 10:04 PM	#3
Frank Metts Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,621 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 2305789	Simple but effective ... not a lot of misdirection straight to the point and we need that some times

09-29-2013, 12:19 PM	#7
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,102 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079722	Lol at the title. Dope. Pat I've told you before each time I read one of your verses it's like your standing on the corner just freestyling some dope shit and that's what this is. The beat worked great with it too. Nice piece here Pat.

10-02-2013, 04:11 PM	#9
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,505 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788022	sick as per usual the positivity scheme was coo Liked the pity oh gloom line the best, lol. It was funny to me pce doggggg __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

10-03-2013, 03:39 PM	#10
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	@Aero __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.

10-08-2013, 09:58 PM	#11
Eŋg rhyme capsule. Join Date: Sep 2018 Posts: 2,150 Rep Power: 0	NAME NAMES, YOU CANUCKIAN MOTHERFUCK nah. i mean yea. thought this was pretty dope. more or less throughout, no actual trips, just some lines not hitting me like others. it's relative tho. The truth when he spat sick, rhyming diseases Smooth and elaborate, lines of a genius I do plenty classes, to pilot mc’s cause Too many rappers just cry in their pieces The highest achievement is learning to be real (y)ow(zers).