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CopyPat 09-28-2013 02:33 PM

Textual Healing
 
I don’t really have to act like I’m packin
9’s or milly’s, that’s just fact, it’s not happenin
Rhymes are illy, tracks are phat when I crack em
Cause I just really rap to rap about rappin!
The truth when he spat sick, rhyming diseases
Smooth and elaborate, lines of a genius
I do plenty classes, to pilot mc’s cause
Too many rappers just cry in their pieces
The highest achievement is learning to be real
Rhyming is easy if your gonna preach killin
Death n hate, never celebrate
What lies in my feelings is a yearning for peace still
Determined to keep dealin in positivity
My verses are deep, but still in that raw vicinity
I’m earning my keep, skill in the top ability
And nursing mc’s cause they not as ill as me
Honest, it could be some next shit, simply dope
But ya’ll just sit and think I flexed this, since it flows
Common senses seem neglected in ya whole
Persona bitches, this is net shit.. really jokes
Silly old dudes sittin behind a keyboard
Really don’t do what I’m tryin to see more
Spitting oldschool is the rhymes I fiend for
But pity oh gloom is the kinds I read more
And guys just beef or pretend to be hardened
They mindless geeks with their enemy targets
It’s mentally retarded to argue in threads when
Pathetically starving for all the attention
So call me a henchman, cause I slave to the rhythm
But I always impress when displayin a written
Ya probly upset since you played in the system
Why all these defenseman should change their position


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M-KNGLkjjS4
da beat:

Certain 09-28-2013 02:36 PM

Get 'em.

Frank Metts 09-28-2013 10:04 PM

Simple but effective ... not a lot of misdirection straight to the point and we need that some times

e11even 09-28-2013 11:38 PM

You should record this if you havent already. This would sound pretty good in audio.

Just Write 09-29-2013 10:18 AM

Lol good to see you still beastin it lyrically pat. I enjoyed this... and your long ass drop of cyphers lol. Whats your aim? I'm gunna go download it now. We should cypher a bit. Anyways stay up

Geno 09-29-2013 12:11 PM

This was awesome copy
Loved the short bar writing.

Couple lines I dug the most were...

The truth when he spat sick, rhyming diseases
Smooth and elaborate,lines of a genius
I do plenty classes, to pilot mc’s cause
Too many rappers just cry in their pieces

Badweather/geno audio collab coming tonight, lookout for it
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Zen 09-29-2013 12:19 PM

Lol at the title. Dope. Pat I've told you before each time I read one of your verses it's like your standing on the corner just freestyling some dope shit and that's what this is. The beat worked great with it too. Nice piece here Pat.

CopyPat 10-02-2013 03:14 PM

haha thanks. i tried to do something a little different in this one since everyone just says all my shit are "flex pieces"

Wise Wiggles 10-02-2013 04:11 PM

sick as per usual
the positivity scheme was coo
Liked the pity oh gloom line the best, lol. It was funny to me
pce doggggg

Witty 10-03-2013 03:39 PM

@Aero

Eŋg 10-08-2013 09:58 PM

NAME NAMES, YOU CANUCKIAN MOTHERFUCK

nah. i mean yea. thought this was pretty dope. more or less throughout, no actual trips, just some lines not hitting me like others. it's relative tho.

The truth when he spat sick, rhyming diseases
Smooth and elaborate, lines of a genius
I do plenty classes, to pilot mc’s cause
Too many rappers just cry in their pieces
The highest achievement is learning to be real


(y)ow(zers).


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