Does This Verse Make Sense?

[SpookyDeep]

Originally Posted by VERITAS

die.


Bitch get your weight up, I rape your soul until it’s broken so:
bet this nine will fuck your face up and nigga no-Tonio.

You’re no threat cuz your bars empty; it’s always sunny in Philadelphia.
My blade crosses your face twice, that’s quality, motherfucking X-celsior

Professor X swag, I can violate your mind without even having to stand up,
My sword sticks him up, cuz when I stab him, he SHRIVELS as he’s RAISIN his hands up

Peks aint ill with words or a legend, trust that I see through a bitch like a sonogram,
V a Professional assassin, SO u won’t see murder like Master P’s brother was hollow man

Lui-He-Ba-Fa liquid fists pummel your chest, call me IP man, I collapse this B’s lungs
Pecs lost, Cuz Everyone knows that dope gets flushed whenever the heat comes

Bitch.

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[Sho Money EMG]

That verse is dope lol

[veritas]

Dont do this g.kyle......it will only help people see how ahead of my time I am with concepts and approach.

And you love penis.

[God Of War]

i wont say i thought V lost but i will say i think otpeks got the bad hand of voters who didnt get his verse lol

either or round 2 is up

[veritas]

And peks in your crew?

[God Of War]

nope, and i didnt say u lost, but ur not a battler ur punches show that

i expect you to do well this round


u got a meh win last round it happens to us all

[veritas]

Dude...dont say I aint got punches...just say you dont get them

Your bars empty, always sunny in philedelphia.

[Sho Money EMG]

First two bars were firee, raisin line was dope, and heat come dope flushed sick finisher overall I don't see how u could dislike this verse at all

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by VERITAS

Dude...dont say I aint got punches...just say you dont get them

Your bars empty, always sunny in philedelphia.

ytou dont have punches, you have statements, saying your going to stab someone, kill them, etc is a statement a punch is when you diss your opponent a statement is pretty much that. you did'nt have punches bro. the voters voted they liked urs better that's fine. I am just telling you that you did not have punches.


statements=not punches

[God Of War]

the hollow man bar was a punch etc

[veritas]

I stand behind my style. Yall act like I cant conform to this sites style that shit is easy.

Where does it say there has to be a nonsensical set up before every punch?

Here is a netcees punch:

ya kitten butters my crews bread, we call ya bitch toast
Your writtens wouldnt have views of they were split8' roast

Real talk I would rather lose every battle on this site then change my style. The futures history
Will vindicate my words.

[veritas]

Your bars empty it always sunny in philedelphia aont a dis?
I see thru a bitch like a sonagram?


You are confused because i but punches where set ups go sometimes bc I dont believe in wasting.

I will punch whenevwr I can bc I am a killer. Also if I hit you amd you dont realize it....I win on principle.

[veritas]

Pecs lost? Pummel chest? Dope is flushed when tje heat comes?

Cmon man....

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by VERITAS

I stand behind my style. Yall act like I cant conform to this sites style that shit is easy.

Where does it say there has to be a nonsensical set up before every punch?

Here is a netcees punch:

ya kitten butters my crews bread, we call ya bitch toast
Your writtens wouldnt have views of they were split8' roast

Real talk I would rather lose every battle on this site then change my style. The futures history
Will vindicate my words.

its not about style...look if you went into a boxng ring right? would you try to hug the guy instead of punch him? no? it doesnt matter the style u use to hit him but you still have to hit him. going in there and hugging him would get your ass beat

no matter what a punch is a punch, a statement is a statement it isnt about you being different you can be completely different and use punches still...or you can do it n use statements

in no form of battling in the world are you not suppose to diss ur opponent is my point...saying ur going to cut me is simply that

be different i agree with that but you can still fix ur punches it doesnt mean they have to be the same but they still have to hit

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by VERITAS

Pecs lost? Pummel chest? Dope is flushed when tje heat comes?

Cmon man....

I get the bar, but tell me this, how does it diss him? explain that to me and i will agree with you how does saying dope is flushed when the heat comes actually diss otpeks?

[SpookyDeep]

VERITAS is trash at text

[Brian Bryan]

is GOW suggesting 'ask Beavis, i get nothing Butthead ' isn't a punchline

because it's a statement and not dissing someone?

you newer textcees sicken me

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by Brian Bryan

is GOW suggesting 'ask Beavis, i get nothing Butthead ' isn't a punchline

because it's a statement and not dissing someone?

you newer textcees sicken me

not new and that shit isnt a punchline

punch means to hit, ie the butt of a joke is the part of a joke that hits, aka the punchline u being in a live battle league is a bit sad without you knowing that

and text is different then live shit aswell

[Brian Bryan]

Originally Posted by God Of War

not new and that shit isnt a punchline

punch means to hit, ie the butt of a joke is the part of a joke that hits, aka the punchline u being in a live battle league is a bit sad without you knowing that

and text is different then live shit aswell

@ill nik-A @trap

please school this textcee for me

i'm at work right now

kthnxbye

[God Of War]

Originally Posted by Brian Bryan

@ill nik-A @trap

please school this textcee for me

i'm at work right now

kthnxbye

lmao cuz ur in a writing group u know more? gtfo here with that

i been listening to rap longer, probably writing longer since i been doing it since 99

u cant tell me a fucking meta4 and a punchline is exactly the same thing