Contrast or Conrads?

[Mr. J]

I'm...twisted in a vision mixed with the emissions
admittin' I'm very different when my state of thoughts missin'
addicted to the high but when I'm lifted I'll dip in
do the salsa with a midget until my erection kicks in
tips him over and I get blamed for gettin' to the point
I'm driven with joy but I hate the absurd scriptures deployed
I'm gettin' annoyed but after a hour I dismiss it as coy
enjoy the minutes when I'm in it I'll need limited noise
I smash heads, bored out my mind with a violin and coke line
dreamin' of Spring and December and a million other times
like....like....potent prophecy those notes are ghost & gone to me
while I brood in hopeless harmony, hoping Hope would honor me
open the door so I can continuously quote the GOAT, the God in me
I suppose it's a inside joke to poke fun at those who commonly...
ordinarily....basically take offense to the shit you say...honestly
fuck that, and I quote "fuck that" who am I under the impression
just another exception another twist on another expression
til' I make another connection and you can tell me what is accepted
I'm sorry I'm beside myself...fin

[Vulgar]

Good stuff, the middle had strong spirit in it, esp. with the dense internal rhyming. Not too dense, but just right enough to make it easily readable.

[theMuzzl3]

I dig it.

"an hour", just to be a dick.

But, I dig your style. Some negativity in it, but you say it like you mean it, and it seems to come from the heart.

[Adonis]

hmm...Good shit bro. I miss your stories. Like that dinner of death; the round table. Youve produced some really dope verses, all of which have been short. I wish you would focus more on a single verse, just fleshing that shit out and making it epic, yet keeping your signature free flowing, "key style esque" flow. This was a decent track with a few good bars, which was needed considering the length. But there were a few lines that simply weren't as good. Keep, doing you Old Timer