Verse against Kannon aka Nick Jones

[Sho Money EMG]

U people dont deserve to read my golden writtens.

[Objective]

Even though you saved people from listening to this trash you're still a bitch for not recording it to your battle vs. him.

[Sho Money EMG]

I had no way to record it man. Tha fuck?

U act like I wanted to lose when I could've easily chapped that tourney by taking out the strongest competitor in the first rd

I wrote a verse didn't i?

Lol still I get disrespected even when I honor a battle that's been closed for a week

[anime_boners]

Originally Posted by Lyfzin Shambles

I had no way to record it man. Tha fuck?

U act like I wanted to lose when I could've easily chapped that tourney by taking out the strongest competitor in the first rd

Originally Posted by Lyfzin Shambles

Wtf im recording it now

U really wanna win wit a no show @kannon

[big baby]

yeah its been closed for a week

[Swerve]

Gambini, you should still record it at some point.

[Sho Money EMG]

Originally Posted by Swerve

Gambini, you should still record it at some point.

Yeah I'm gonna tomorrow. Just won't be good quality cud idk how to get the beat in the program.

[Objective]

Originally Posted by Lyfzin Shambles

Yeah I'm gonna tomorrow. Just won't be good quality cud idk how to get the beat in the program.

Cool. The only reason I was negative af towards you is that you agreed to do an audio only to bail when the other dude obviously put time into this shit. Sucks if the quality aint great, but anything is better than no-showing.

[kannon]

Originally Posted by Lyfzin Shambles

Yeah I'm gonna tomorrow. Just won't be good quality cud idk how to get the beat in the program.

I gave you a full break down on how to import the beat in that other thread.

[Sho Money EMG]

Yo if u ain't gonna leave feedback then don't come in here.

I'm only posting this to honor me and kannons agreement. He asked me to. Ima spit over the beat n record it too so we could get some votes

[Sho Money EMG]

@kannon

[kannon]

Your best bar is the Star Jones one.

...Let me rephrase that;
Your only decent bar is the Star Jones one.

I still want to hear you rap this, and not have sloppy as shit flow. and I still think it's funny that you think you could beat me with this. And I think most of your bars are built for text and people probably wouldn't get them when rapped.

[BROKE LESNAR]

tbh, u should really incorporate the style u use for audio into ur text battles

just reading ur text battles and comparing them to this, two entirely different approaches

[Sho Money EMG]

Originally Posted by BROKE LESNAR

tbh, u should really incorporate the style u use for audio into ur text battles

just reading ur text battles and comparing them to this, two entirely different approaches

Word good looks Broke.

I been working on it.

Btw @kannon u are a fucking idiot kid. U got str8 merked. Have no respect for someone that can't give props when there deserved

Smh pathetic.

[Split]

>audio tourney
>text verse a week later
>str8 merked

[Diode]

Originally Posted by Split

>audio tourney
>text verse a week later
>str8 merked

STOP MURDERING ME WITH THESE LOLS

[kannon]

Originally Posted by Lyfzin Shambles

Btw @kannon u are a fucking idiot kid. U got str8 merked. Have no respect for someone that can't give props when there deserved

Smh pathetic.

Son, you put 32 bars against my 84.

don't be mad at me because you were like "oh man kannon, your shit was better than I thought it would be." and I didn't feel the same way about yours.

It was pretty much right on par with where I thought it would be. Which is why I was so confident, and still am, that I would destroy you.

I'll give you a better breakdown. You had three bars of intro, which is fine. every battle starts with a basic intro. Your first punchline is that I don't take a bunch of selfies on instagram. Next you try to say that I shouldn't have chosen to battle you. But I actually put forth effort into making sure I got you in round one and that it was a battle theme, so I don't see those lines holding much weight. Next is the "shitting on a can/kan" line. super basic. and the set up was basically irrelevant to the punch. Next is some complex shit. You lead with "you missed your calling, watering plants" which means absolutely nothing to anyone or anything. You have to just hold onto that line, because three bars later, you reference Madison Square GARDEN, where you say you wouldnt root for Nick/Knick. The garden shit was whack as fuck. Not creative at all. doesn't make sense as a double entendre. And basically holds no weight. the Nick/Knick line is okay, but your set up was all over the place. Star Jones line was solid. I knew the Kansir line cause you posted it in the other thread. I thought it was corny as fuck then, and I think it's corny as fuck now. that being said, I think the cancer/Kan sir play had some potential. I've surprisingly never heard it before. But I think your execution was okay at best. The Nickelback shit is the worst line in this verse. It's worded poorly, and it plays on the idea that anyone here would know that Nickleback has an album called The Road. Which I am only assuming because you capitalized it. This means that this line would only work in text unless your audience is Nickelback fans. (Okay, I just googled it, and their album isn't even called The Road, it's called The Long Road. That makes the line even worse.) I've heard way too many Nick Cannon lines for "you're wylin' out" to be remotely impressive. And seeing as how I'm currently beating Seadad (my only real competition as far as I am concerned), my "dreams" of making it to the finals are very real.

I really wish I could just shake your hand, say good game, and we could be pals about this. But you really are an egotistical asshole with no real talent.

And I still don't believe you have a meeting with universal.

This is the end of my book. Thank you for reading.

[DLB]

how'd kannon get straight merked when gamble couldn't even get in a studio to record this?

this has tl;dr all over it

[Sho Money EMG]

Lmao. Thanks for the close minded/I'm better no matter what u say breakdown.

I know my shit goes hard. Especially when I spit it, so u could say whatever u want to downplay my verse it really doesn't matter to me considering ur verse was trash compared to mine... U can't even flow, ur all choppy an shit... Don't even make me breakdown ur garbage...

[Zen]

Originally Posted by Lyfzin Shambles

Lmao. Thanks for the close minded/I'm better no matter what u say breakdown.

Isn't that what you do in, like, every battle?