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Originally Posted by Lyfzin Shambles
(Post 380979)
Btw @ kannon u are a fucking idiot kid. U got str8 merked. Have no respect for someone that can't give props when there deserved
Smh pathetic.
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Son, you put 32 bars against my 84.
don't be mad at me because you were like "oh man kannon, your shit was better than I thought it would be." and I didn't feel the same way about yours.
It was pretty much right on par with where I thought it would be. Which is why I was so confident, and still am, that I would destroy you.
I'll give you a better breakdown. You had three bars of intro, which is fine. every battle starts with a basic intro. Your first punchline is that I don't take a bunch of selfies on instagram. Next you try to say that I shouldn't have chosen to battle you. But I actually put forth effort into making sure I got you in round one and that it was a battle theme, so I don't see those lines holding much weight. Next is the "shitting on a can/kan" line. super basic. and the set up was basically irrelevant to the punch. Next is some complex shit. You lead with "you missed your calling, watering plants" which means absolutely nothing to anyone or anything. You have to just hold onto that line, because three bars later, you reference Madison Square
GARDEN, where you say you wouldnt root for Nick/Knick. The garden shit was whack as fuck. Not creative at all. doesn't make sense as a double entendre. And basically holds no weight. the Nick/Knick line is okay, but your set up was all over the place. Star Jones line was solid. I knew the Kansir line cause you posted it in the other thread. I thought it was corny as fuck then, and I think it's corny as fuck now. that being said, I think the cancer/Kan sir play had some potential. I've surprisingly never heard it before. But I think your execution was okay at best. The Nickelback shit is the worst line in this verse. It's worded poorly, and it plays on the idea that anyone here would know that Nickleback has an album called The Road. Which I am only assuming because you capitalized it. This means that this line would only work in text unless your audience is Nickelback fans. (Okay, I just googled it, and their album isn't even called The Road, it's called The Long Road. That makes the line even worse.) I've heard way too many Nick Cannon lines for "you're wylin' out" to be remotely impressive. And seeing as how I'm currently beating Seadad (my only real competition as far as I am concerned), my "dreams" of making it to the finals are very real.
I really wish I could just shake your hand, say good game, and we could be pals about this. But you really are an egotistical asshole with no real talent.
And I still don't believe you have a meeting with universal.
This is the end of my book. Thank you for reading.