RBN PRESENTS: Dizaster vs Detour (Free for 30 days!!!)

detour · 06-21-2013, 05:05 PM

lemme know what y'all think...it's much better on the official footage than the bootleg bullshit IMO...

super pimp trillionaire · 06-21-2013, 05:15 PM

smh @ killin niggas kids in battle raps tho...
dsapnt.

rd one detour for sure.
diz lack of prep is covered by his amt of time doin this shit.
he didnt really need it nigga had preboxed rhymes... real emcees recognize...
his shit was funny as fuck but so was D...

rd 2
damn@ the exposure, how bey of you...
letterbomb piece was fire...
/
LMAO @ retarded love
cut ppl behind me was rofz, plus see how he let them niggas finish laughin
lmao @ niggas lungs tho. see how he said wasting punchlines? he got mad shit on deck obv this was mostly generic and to not say Detour got it is kinda dumb...
eat a dick niggas

tips and opinions
run the mountains nigga you need breath
keep ya schemes open so non rappers can hear wtf you're saying
id rather twitch then look like a dick tryina draw attention away from the battle. twitch harder

Ghost1 · 06-21-2013, 05:35 PM

I could hear u.....but i doubt most could.....space out ur schemes.....an cant u hear the crowd? If they start to ooo an ahhhh take a moment.....let them get loud....makes u look better....ur worst fault right now is crowd.control an ur crammed schemes.....diz has schemes like that but he does them in bursts then lets the crowd.suck his dick after

His rebuttles were so fierce tho.....that cut everyone behind me shit was too raw.

I watched the whole thing yesterday

Had diz.....but u got bars...per usual...just gotta space em out

super pimp trillionaire · 06-21-2013, 05:39 PM

^ see?

super pimp trillionaire · 06-21-2013, 05:45 PM

oh yeah second the rebuttals... cut ya prepped bars down massively massively and get ya frees up my dude.
but if you store smaller patterns and more varied topics you'll stand out...
just opinions...

Destroyer · 06-21-2013, 06:09 PM

good shit detour
you're new style I like it
diz didn't prepare obv. all he had was the computer glitch shit, that was roflz
you lyrically demolished him tho,
wasn't even close, tbh

06-21-2013, 05:45 PM

Though PJ's first round was prett dope content wise.

But pretty much was Bags said.

Keep doin. You, dog.

Allen Knight · 06-21-2013, 06:12 PM

Dope shit dawg

Destroyer · 06-21-2013, 06:16 PM

also, SLOW down
when you go slowly, I can understand you, reflect on what you are saying and it allows your punches to connect
then, you speed up, and it's all I can do to understand what you are saying, no time to really appreciate what you're saying, if that makes sense

Philly · 06-21-2013, 06:17 PM

I'll continue the trend of constructive criticism.
Never do that "Pluuuuss you're crews a bunch of squares" voice or style of speech again.

Your delivery was much nicer on this than the bootleg, could barely hear that shit.
But slow down everything.
And since you got the old tweaks and everyone knows it now...
you should definitely have some punches on deck or rebuttals about it.
Same way Diz tries to make the fact he's lebanese cool by actin like some al qaeda boss

Looked & sounded a lot better on here than the other video though

Destroyer · 06-21-2013, 06:31 PM

second Philly on ixne on the 'squares' voice

detour · 06-21-2013, 07:16 PM

the feedback is appreciated...

i spit a little faster than i usually would in this one cuz i wanted to beat dizaster at his own game, i.e., that rapid fire back to back rhyme scheme shit...

an it's hard to always tell when to give the crowd a second an when to keep goin...i do try to be conscious of that, but i'm still perfecting things namean...

thanks for watchin it...lol @ the criticism of the "squares" voice hahaha...i tried somethin different there with the vocal inflection...worked on damn jafar...

but word, i definitely take all the advice in an do best with it what i can...i like usin the back to back compounds tho', i wouldn't be me if i didn't do that...

06-21-2013, 07:20 PM

I stuck this for you @detour

GKillaZ · 06-21-2013, 08:28 PM

I think Diz won this. Props for Real Deal hand shake tho. he is dope for sure.
I'll be looking out for ya in the future. get over to KOTD?!?

06-21-2013, 08:39 PM

Why don't u just get out of canada

GKillaZ · 06-21-2013, 08:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Meth

Why don't u just get out of canada

record wont let me. why?

detour · 06-22-2013, 01:03 AM

^^^same reason I'm not in KOTD yet...already talked to gully, but that said I think I'm battling at the next battle of the bay event in kotd fresh coast this september...

an word @ meth, g/lookin yo...

Cakedout · 06-22-2013, 02:24 AM

Nice battle

God Of War · 06-22-2013, 04:18 AM

i dont know detour had bars he always has bars

but diz was back in his face and the freestyling and the rebuttals just made it to nice

i sitll think diz edged it

Spoken · 06-22-2013, 06:08 AM

If we talking Baez I got detour honestly eve if Diz was free styling he made it look real shitty and detour that squares voice ain't as bad as Diz and his let me think what is relevant and rhyme with what I said hymn he always stretches like his wal mart rebutal

Detour u got bars gsm just like what everyone else said sharpen ya performance a bit and you easily control the crowd

06-21-2013, 05:15 PM	#2
super pimp trillionaire your ad here Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,762 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 400737	smh @ killin niggas kids in battle raps tho... dsapnt. rd one detour for sure. diz lack of prep is covered by his amt of time doin this shit. he didnt really need it nigga had preboxed rhymes... real emcees recognize... his shit was funny as fuck but so was D... rd 2 damn@ the exposure, how bey of you... letterbomb piece was fire... / LMAO @ retarded love cut ppl behind me was rofz, plus see how he let them niggas finish laughin lmao @ niggas lungs tho. see how he said wasting punchlines? he got mad shit on deck obv this was mostly generic and to not say Detour got it is kinda dumb... eat a dick niggas tips and opinions run the mountains nigga you need breath keep ya schemes open so non rappers can hear wtf you're saying id rather twitch then look like a dick tryina draw attention away from the battle. twitch harder __________________ Comics get collapsed, they crash from skerx they brakes too quick Hard like iron, watch the shine, scorch ya shit... cock back the chevy nigga show me if you billet proof FFC, cohpe wit it bitches... Last edited by super pimp trillionaire; 06-21-2013 at 05:43 PM.

06-21-2013, 05:39 PM	#4
super pimp trillionaire your ad here Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,762 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 400737	^ see? __________________ Comics get collapsed, they crash from skerx they brakes too quick Hard like iron, watch the shine, scorch ya shit... cock back the chevy nigga show me if you billet proof FFC, cohpe wit it bitches...

06-21-2013, 05:45 PM	#5
super pimp trillionaire your ad here Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,762 Battle Record: 0-1 Rep Power: 400737	oh yeah second the rebuttals... cut ya prepped bars down massively massively and get ya frees up my dude. but if you store smaller patterns and more varied topics you'll stand out... just opinions... __________________ Comics get collapsed, they crash from skerx they brakes too quick Hard like iron, watch the shine, scorch ya shit... cock back the chevy nigga show me if you billet proof FFC, cohpe wit it bitches...

06-21-2013, 06:12 PM	#8
Allen Knight Foreva us, neva them. Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 9,176 Battle Record: 106-34 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Key to Greatness I - BA Cypher Tournament - Tag Team Tournament I - Fight Night LXXVI - Time to Kill V - Fight Night LXXX - 1-2 Punch League - Fight Night Cypher II - Key Grand Prix IV - NBL Cypher (7x) - Throwdown Cypher - Netcees Battle League (2x) - BA Cypher III - Fight Night 1 - Tag Team Tournament V Rep Power: 85899401	Dope shit dawg __________________ C.O.B The Bad Guys.

06-21-2013, 08:28 PM	#14
GKillaZ Killin' G'z Join Date: May 2013 Location: CANADA Posts: 318 Battle Record: 1-4 Rep Power: 37	I think Diz won this. Props for Real Deal hand shake tho. he is dope for sure. I'll be looking out for ya in the future. get over to KOTD?!? __________________ [SIGPIC]http://img2.imagetitan.com/img2/116185608/43/43_untitleddd.gif[/SIGPIC]

06-21-2013, 06:09 PM	#6
Destroyer Bags will be avenged Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,621 Battle Record: 85-58 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - Gimmick Battle League - 1-2 Punch League (5x) - Fight Night LXXIX - Fight Night 4 - Netcees Battle League (2x) - NPL Roast Rep Power: 84181421	good shit detour you're new style I like it diz didn't prepare obv. all he had was the computer glitch shit, that was roflz you lyrically demolished him tho, wasn't even close, tbh

06-21-2013, 05:45 PM	#7
Meth Guest Posts: n/a	Though PJ's first round was prett dope content wise. But pretty much was Bags said. Keep doin. You, dog.

06-21-2013, 06:16 PM	#9
Destroyer Bags will be avenged Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,621 Battle Record: 85-58 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - Gimmick Battle League - 1-2 Punch League (5x) - Fight Night LXXIX - Fight Night 4 - Netcees Battle League (2x) - NPL Roast Rep Power: 84181421	also, SLOW down when you go slowly, I can understand you, reflect on what you are saying and it allows your punches to connect then, you speed up, and it's all I can do to understand what you are saying, no time to really appreciate what you're saying, if that makes sense

06-21-2013, 06:17 PM	#10
Philly Only The Strong Survive Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 325 Battle Record: 8-8 Rep Power: 37	I'll continue the trend of constructive criticism. Never do that "Pluuuuss you're crews a bunch of squares" voice or style of speech again. Your delivery was much nicer on this than the bootleg, could barely hear that shit. But slow down everything. And since you got the old tweaks and everyone knows it now... you should definitely have some punches on deck or rebuttals about it. Same way Diz tries to make the fact he's lebanese cool by actin like some al qaeda boss Looked & sounded a lot better on here than the other video though

06-21-2013, 06:31 PM	#11
Destroyer Bags will be avenged Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 12,621 Battle Record: 85-58 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - Gimmick Battle League - 1-2 Punch League (5x) - Fight Night LXXIX - Fight Night 4 - Netcees Battle League (2x) - NPL Roast Rep Power: 84181421	second Philly on ixne on the 'squares' voice

06-21-2013, 07:16 PM	#12
detour Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 598 Accomplishments - Beat Diz (via Real Deal Handshake) Rep Power: 690963	the feedback is appreciated... i spit a little faster than i usually would in this one cuz i wanted to beat dizaster at his own game, i.e., that rapid fire back to back rhyme scheme shit... an it's hard to always tell when to give the crowd a second an when to keep goin...i do try to be conscious of that, but i'm still perfecting things namean... thanks for watchin it...lol @ the criticism of the "squares" voice hahaha...i tried somethin different there with the vocal inflection...worked on damn jafar... but word, i definitely take all the advice in an do best with it what i can...i like usin the back to back compounds tho', i wouldn't be me if i didn't do that...

06-21-2013, 07:20 PM	#13
Meth Guest Posts: n/a	I stuck this for you @detour

06-21-2013, 08:39 PM	#15
Meth Guest Posts: n/a	Why don't u just get out of canada

06-22-2013, 01:03 AM	#17
detour Senior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 598 Accomplishments - Beat Diz (via Real Deal Handshake) Rep Power: 690963	^^^same reason I'm not in KOTD yet...already talked to gully, but that said I think I'm battling at the next battle of the bay event in kotd fresh coast this september... an word @ meth, g/lookin yo...

06-22-2013, 02:24 AM	#18
Cakedout Senior Member Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 131 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 37	Nice battle

06-22-2013, 04:18 AM	#19
God Of War The Landlord Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,822 Battle Record: 12-10 Rep Power: 10493983	i dont know detour had bars he always has bars but diz was back in his face and the freestyling and the rebuttals just made it to nice i sitll think diz edged it

06-22-2013, 06:08 AM	#20
Spoken ...DA GAWD... Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,355 Battle Record: 13-34 Rep Power: 5860413	If we talking Baez I got detour honestly eve if Diz was free styling he made it look real shitty and detour that squares voice ain't as bad as Diz and his let me think what is relevant and rhyme with what I said hymn he always stretches like his wal mart rebutal Detour u got bars gsm just like what everyone else said sharpen ya performance a bit and you easily control the crowd __________________ WP Po'ethics